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. Eve Roper Contest Put Yourself in their Shoes

Date Posted 27th July 2023 Syllables 10 per line.

Sowing seeds of kindness, We shall come rejoicing, bringing in the sheaves – Knowles Shaw (1874) My mind wanders as we bring in the sheaves. I dream of pretty dresses with puffed sleeves. Of pearl white shoes, and jewelry to wear. Lace gloves and emerald combs for my hair. A young man to escort me to a fair. We would hold hands and enjoy fun while there. He would invite me to a fancy ball. We would dine and dance right through past night fall. I know others have dreams almost the same. We accept our work, in dreams there’s no shame. I doubt ladies in mansions dream of more. They don’t think of working or being poor. A gentle breeze stirs, I wake from my dream. I see my fine clothes gone, all that did gleam. The wind stronger blowing hard, tossing leaves. Hurry, before the storm, bring in the sheaves.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/28/2023 10:41:00 PM

"The wind stronger blowing hard, tossing leaves" - great scenic description all through. Congratulations!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 11:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Christuraj, I really appreciate your kind words, Best wishes from SV

Valsa George

Date: 8/28/2023 9:10:00 PM

Absolutely love it . I was with the young lass dreaming away. There's absolutely no shame in dreaming ! Dreamscape is a land open to the rich and the poor. Beautiful imagination dear SV. Congratulations on your top win.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 11:32:00 PM

Thanks so much Valsa. I am usually critical of my own work, but even I like this one. Your lovely comment is appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2023 12:30:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 7:22:00 PM

Eve thank you so much. I really hoped that you would like it. I wrote it with you in mind, knowing your love of children's tales. Your picture of these girls, particularly the one daydreaming, just captured my heart.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2023 6:29:00 AM

SV, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 7:20:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. I was truly pleased with this win. It really had my heart and soul in it.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2023 7:02:00 AM

This masterfully crafted piece fills my heart with delight, dear friend. My sincerest hopes for success are bestowed upon you. This poetic creation possesses an exquisite charm and a seamless cadence. The vivid imagery and impeccable poem have captivated me. It has been an absolute pleasure to read this poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/28/2023 4:52:00 PM

Ok this one I have to agree!. I am rather pleased with it. The picture told the story, before I even started writing. It was a case of my fingers trying to keep up with my brain dictating, but it was fun. Thank you my friend for liking it as much as I did. Best wishes SV

Christina Bowring

Date: 7/27/2023 3:47:00 PM

This poem is truly lovely and flows beautifully.Great imagery and very well written. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. Best wishes.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 7:12:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting Christina, I steadfastly believe there is no more uplifting encouragement than these comments on Soup. Favorable comments to me are better than a win in a contest.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/27/2023 11:16:00 AM

Dear SV, I adore the daydreamy, introspective spirit of your vivid poem with its vibrant, nostalgic imagery and soulful expression. You’ve put yourself in their shoes with potent poetic prowess and tender finesse. A winner to be sure! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 11:32:00 AM

Susan thank you so much for your kind words, I had to trim some lines when I read more carefully that each line was to be 10 syllables, but it turned out ok. . Your comment is really appreciated.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/27/2023 11:13:00 AM

Nice poem with great theme.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Jay, your comment, as always is appreciated.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/27/2023 7:08:00 AM

I loved your take on this image, SV, and I absolutely love that hymn:) thanks for your numerous comments on my page, pleasure to know that you read so many of my poems:)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 8:09:00 AM

Jo my arm was badly broken and needed steel rods and a mechanism implanted so I could bend my wrist. Even though it was my left arm and I am right handed everything I did took longer. Its healed perfectly now in record time, and finally I can catch up on reading all the poems I missed. Yours included. Thanx for your lovely comment.

Paul Bell

Date: 7/27/2023 4:03:00 AM

Great song to go along with the great words. One thing a human can always do, and that's to drift off to better times.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 4:14:00 AM

Thanks Paul. Eve's contests are fun. Cant be too serious, So I had to make it nice. Glad you like it. Thanks so much for your comment Best wishes SV

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/27/2023 3:17:00 AM

This is so very well done, I enjoyed every word dear poet. winning wishes are being sent your way, I know Eve will love this :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 3:40:00 AM

Wow thank you so much, such a lovely compliment. This was take two- after I realized every line had to be trimmed to 10 syllables. I so appreciate your comment. Best wishes from SV