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.                    Eve Roper Contest Put Yourself in their Shoes

                   Date Posted  27th July 2023    Syllables 10 per line.

Bring In the Sheaves

Sowing seeds of kindness, We shall come rejoicing, bringing in the sheaves 
                                                                         – Knowles Shaw  (1874) 

My mind wanders as we bring in the sheaves. I dream of pretty dresses with puffed sleeves. Of pearl white shoes, and jewelry to wear. Lace gloves and emerald combs for my hair. A young man to escort me to a fair. We would hold hands and enjoy fun while there. He would invite me to a fancy ball. We would dine and dance right through past night fall. I know others have dreams almost the same. We accept our work, in dreams there’s no shame. I doubt ladies in mansions dream of more. They don’t think of working or being poor. A gentle breeze stirs, I wake from my dream. I see my fine clothes gone, all that did gleam. The wind stronger blowing hard, tossing leaves. Hurry, before the storm, bring in the sheaves.
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Alex Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:41 PM
"The wind stronger blowing hard, tossing leaves" - great scenic description all through. Congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:31 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj, I really appreciate your kind words, Best wishes from SV
George Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Absolutely love it . I was with the young lass dreaming away. There's absolutely no shame in dreaming ! Dreamscape is a land open to the rich and the poor. Beautiful imagination dear SV. Congratulations on your top win.
Volumes Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:32 PM
Thanks so much Valsa. I am usually critical of my own work, but even I like this one. Your lovely comment is appreciated.
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for your wonderful poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve
Volumes Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Eve thank you so much. I really hoped that you would like it. I wrote it with you in mind, knowing your love of children's tales. Your picture of these girls, particularly the one daydreaming, just captured my heart.
Poet Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:29 AM
SV, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.
Volumes Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I was truly pleased with this win. It really had my heart and soul in it.
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:02 AM
This masterfully crafted piece fills my heart with delight, dear friend. My sincerest hopes for success are bestowed upon you. This poetic creation possesses an exquisite charm and a seamless cadence. The vivid imagery and impeccable poem have captivated me. It has been an absolute pleasure to read this poem.
Volumes Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Ok this one I have to agree!. I am rather pleased with it. The picture told the story, before I even started writing. It was a case of my fingers trying to keep up with my brain dictating, but it was fun. Thank you my friend for liking it as much as I did. Best wishes SV
Bowring Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:47 PM
This poem is truly lovely and flows beautifully.Great imagery and very well written. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. Best wishes.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting Christina, I steadfastly believe there is no more uplifting encouragement than these comments on Soup. Favorable comments to me are better than a win in a contest.
Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Dear SV, I adore the daydreamy, introspective spirit of your vivid poem with its vibrant, nostalgic imagery and soulful expression. You’ve put yourself in their shoes with potent poetic prowess and tender finesse. A winner to be sure! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Susan thank you so much for your kind words, I had to trim some lines when I read more carefully that each line was to be 10 syllables, but it turned out ok. . Your comment is really appreciated.
Narain Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Nice poem with great theme.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Thanks so much Jay, your comment, as always is appreciated.
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 7:08 AM
I loved your take on this image, SV, and I absolutely love that hymn:) thanks for your numerous comments on my page, pleasure to know that you read so many of my poems:)
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Jo my arm was badly broken and needed steel rods and a mechanism implanted so I could bend my wrist. Even though it was my left arm and I am right handed everything I did took longer. Its healed perfectly now in record time, and finally I can catch up on reading all the poems I missed. Yours included. Thanx for your lovely comment.
Bell Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Great song to go along with the great words. One thing a human can always do, and that's to drift off to better times.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Thanks Paul. Eve's contests are fun. Cant be too serious, So I had to make it nice. Glad you like it. Thanks so much for your comment Best wishes SV
Rose  Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:17 AM
This is so very well done, I enjoyed every word dear poet. winning wishes are being sent your way, I know Eve will love this :)
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:40 AM
Wow thank you so much, such a lovely compliment. This was take two- after I realized every line had to be trimmed to 10 syllables. I so appreciate your comment. Best wishes from SV
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