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Bring back the sun

At times I used to think life
was a luscious bowl of grapes
but since, in many weeks and months,
we haven't seen the sun ~
I've fundamentally shriveled up,
my mind's become a raisin.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:04 PM
Three days without the sun, and I'm 'raisin' hell.'
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Well, I'm glad to report it's sunny this morning... finally !
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