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At times I used to think life
was a luscious bowl of grapes
but since, in many weeks and months,
we haven't seen the sun ~
I've fundamentally shriveled up,
my mind's become a raisin.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 3/26/2025 10:04:00 PM
Three days without the sun, and I'm 'raisin' hell.'
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Date: 3/27/2025 5:30:00 AM
Well, I'm glad to report it's sunny this morning... finally !

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