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Bright Teeth

bright teeth smiling at me and lighting up green eyes in jack o’lantern candlelight. the gummy insides of its pumpkin cheeks along with its nutritious seeds scooped. empty mindless shell speaks with full moon eyes bright teeth 8/27/2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2018 8:46:00 PM

Nice imagery, Kim! … Won't be long and it'll be the season, as the calendar turns... ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 10:19:00 PM

A fun season!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/27/2018 4:38:00 PM

A captivating imagery expressed in a flawless Rictameter dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/27/2018 1:19:00 PM

Great phrasing 'jack o'lantern candlelight' and 'full moon eyes,' this is spooky-good!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 2:11:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/27/2018 10:06:00 AM

I love this one; fav'd it. Thanks for a great read.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.!