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Bright Night-Bt

The night is calm As fire light glows At my campsite. A white egret Takes to flight, much To my delight. How bright the stars, Glinting quite high Within my sight. 12/5/20 Charlie Messina's contest... Bauk Than-Than Bauk Poetry

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Date: 12/7/2020 7:53:00 AM
A very beautiful scene you have set here. I can see the fire dancing with the stars.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:40:00 AM
If you can visualize the scene my lines are what I'd hoped they'd be. Thank you, Mark.
Date: 12/5/2020 4:48:00 PM
I just saw white egrets this morning on my walk! Lovely sight to see. I love your 3 stanzas depicting 3 sights I enjoy so much. Best wishes ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/5/2020 6:03:00 PM
Hi, John. They are lovely to see, and I see them often. Thanks for liking my lines in this form of Than-Bauk. I enjoyed writing this one.

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