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Bright Miracle

BRIGHT MIRACLE Snow is my dream-home miracle, Always called to me, never cold. Serene, soft, silent, Soul-scoured, fresh, reposing - Like the sound and pure spray Of flowing water over a low weir. White tabula rasa submerging Hard sharp corners; edges are softened. World suddenly transformed, renewed, unspoiled: Long-sought Eden garden From the child-dreams I was forbidden to enter By the guards: the teachers, the church, the grandma, And other cold dark forces Choking my green growth. Dowdy fields, old trees, and dirty walls - Freshly-baptised converts to pure brightness: Industrial dumps, rusted hulks, Row upon row of soulless cellars, In a mantle white from the fairytale shapes Of a Dickens scene on a Christmas card. I feel small again in snow, always did: Impossible become possible: childhood regained.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2011 3:09:00 PM
It's Spring and now you make me miss the warm snow of a Charles Dicken's scene. Nice! Great poem Gwendolen
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Date: 3/17/2011 9:06:00 AM
Regarding the snow, Syd, you have had perhaps too much of a good thing, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:54:00 AM
So many people complain about the snow, Syd, but you and I have something in common. I love the way it creates such a sense of serenity, painting everything pristine white. We don't see much of it in Florida -- none at all this year -- but I bet you enjoyed some great snowfalls this winter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 10:42:00 AM
the innocence of one's heart overflows in this piece as if to detect if whatever is left remain pure still...syd, a one in a million piece.. that's why i know it;s mine, lol wow! :) huggs!
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