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I learned about a new flower. These are from India!

Brief - Lady' Purses -Calceolaria

buttery yellow
      cute puffy flowers splattered
with cinnamon dots

"Red Hots" eye candy are these
      pocket purses on bushes!


July 2, 2017 for  KIM'S COLOR SPLASH CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 7/16/2017 9:06:00 AM
oh, this ios beautiful
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Date: 7/9/2017 8:24:00 AM
Where does the color come from? God's beauty truly calls us to stop and appreciate it's splendor. Thanks for sharing the poem and the picture. And hope you're having a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 7/6/2017 11:38:00 AM
My descriptive talented sister at it again. Love the buttery yellow.
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Date: 7/4/2017 1:02:00 AM
Oh! This is beautiful... Both the flowers and the tanka... Good luck with the contest...
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Date: 7/3/2017 7:25:00 PM
Those are unusual flowers! I am glad that you write a poem everyday. I still write verse and think that more people should. I still volunteer at Poets House. Outside of me - who are your favorite poets. I am off from ESL for the summer. Watching the Mets now and I plan to write some more baseball poems. Gregory Corso and Carl Sandburg are two poets who wrote fine poems about the game. Peace & Power Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/3/2017 11:47:00 AM
That's a very special flower indeed. They look like yellow donuts with red sprinkles :) But your tanka sounds really yummie too. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/3/2017 10:30:00 AM
Lovely Andrea.
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Date: 7/3/2017 8:28:00 AM
This is so nice, Andrea, good luck.... ~*
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Date: 7/3/2017 5:25:00 AM
Great write Andrea :) I hope to see both our names on the winner's list!!
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Date: 7/3/2017 2:48:00 AM
Marvelous description of the flowers and equally marvelous Tanka dearest, Andrea. I had some of these flowers on my roof garden. They were hard to keep. Good luck my dear friend!
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Date: 7/3/2017 1:46:00 AM
Very beautiful flowers and your tanka fits it well, Andrea:)
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Date: 7/2/2017 10:51:00 PM
A very unique flower and a great tanka Andrea...best wishes
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:02:00 PM
I can absolutely see the flowers. But when I was little somehow 'red hots' were dangerous! I think I was the only kid on the block who thought that way; maybe the only kid in town! I wanted the safe, sweet stuff. Now I know it was just cinnamon candy for Pete's sake!
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Date: 7/2/2017 4:59:00 PM
That is just what they look like Andrea. It is hard to believe they are real when you see them in person. A great tanka Andrea. I love the idea of red hots, eye candy! I think this will do great in the contest! : )
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Date: 7/2/2017 4:39:00 PM
What a bizarre looking flowery thingy! Lovely tanka, Andrea! GL
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Date: 7/2/2017 4:30:00 PM
so so beautiful image and imagery Andrea:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/2/2017 4:19:00 PM
looks delicious and pretty, andie... i like the color theme' buttery yellow; amazing!..huggs
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