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Bridge Rising

Antique bridge
Rickety, weathered niche
Time has aged and battered each gray board
How the elements' fury each crevice explored
Impossible its beauty to now be restored
As the waters rage around pilings
Waves lift timbers lashing
Bridge Rising  

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Trois Par Huit A Bridge
Date Written:May 15, 2014

Written from a picture from online...

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 5/31/2014 1:02:00 PM may you never lose your dexterity of pen and creative flair, sara...realistic and superbly done.. May you never lose your dexterity of pen and creative flair!!! Login to Reply

Jake Ponce Date: 5/31/2014 8:27:00 AM Great work, Sara! This is very scenic. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/31/2014 5:18:00 AM Congrats on thge win with this perfect Trois Par Huit, sara Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 6:42:00 PM Vivid imagery..:) nice one..:) Congratulations!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/29/2014 6:41:00 PM SARA, Congratulations, in Nette's "TROIS PAR HUIT A BRIDGE contest." always~ Linda Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 10:36:00 PM Great write,,Perfect to the pic Sara ! congrats on huge win ! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/28/2014 2:12:00 PM This is a wonderful poem. A BIG winner to me. congrats. BG Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/28/2014 1:49:00 PM No need to see the original picture...you painted it with this beautiful write! Congrats on a fine win! // paul Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/23/2014 10:07:00 AM Dear Sara, I have not seen the picture, but your description of it is so vivid that I can see this bridge in my mind. Awesome entry for the contest. Sending winning wishes to you, dear friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/18/2014 3:03:00 PM love this - a sure big winner, my friend Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 5/16/2014 6:10:00 PM Hi Sara, Very solid poem here. You can feel the bridge rising. I wanted to thank you Sara for your kind words re: Love From Above. I could not respond in the conventional manner due to a computer glitch. Good luck and continued success with your poems. Have a great day. Earl Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 5/15/2014 3:31:00 PM This is beautiful Sara you paint such an inviting picture. I imagine myself on the shoreline gazing at this magnificent wonder....hugs Tim Login to Reply