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Bride's Veil

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. Bridal veil spills across the edge. Groom in deep thought contemplates his pledge. Contest: Crystalline Euphony Sponsor:John Freeman *Note Click on "About This Poem"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:49:00 PM

finally reviewing the winners' list. Glad to see this one again. Congrats on your placement I think shared with me!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:47:00 PM

finally reviewing the winners' list. Glad to see this one again. Congrats on your placement I think shared with me!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 7:14:00 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,sara

Judy Ball

Date: 9/6/2011 2:15:00 PM

Nicely done Sara. Seems the groom should have done all his thinking before the wedding, so should she. Good stuff, God Bless,JB

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/6/2011 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Sara! hmm...is this before vows or after? either way, yikes! very thought provoking :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2011 11:07:00 PM

beautifully done, congrats on your win in the contest

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 4:08:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Sara : )

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your win...enjoyed.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2011 3:02:00 PM

Love the metaphorical approach you took to the photograph, Sara. Very creative and surely worthy of a win. Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/5/2011 1:50:00 PM

very sweet & thoughtful, Sara. hope things are well with you, take care ~Always&Forever Lynette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2011 10:03:00 AM

And a super congrats to you also!!! Lovely to be in he same list of winners with you...luv Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2011 7:28:00 AM

Sara enjoyed your interpretation.. Congratulations on your win :) Wilma

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:28:00 AM

hey Sara congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 3:10:00 AM

Congrats Sara on 4th place win with this dynamic poetry from the photo presented my friend... amazing and creative words luv..sorry if I confused u in s.m..now I forgot what my reply was..haha..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 1:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 1:23:00 AM

Beautiful thought Sara..Thanks...congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 9/4/2011 10:33:00 PM

A wonderfull approach to the contest theme Sara.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 9:40:00 PM

Sara, this one could even be a murder mystery!! I could see a bride falling off a cliff and her veil still fluttering there while the groom sits there (did he do it?) Well, I have to tell you, you chose a great imagery for waterfall. Near Provo we have Bridal Veil FALLS and so this HAS to be the name of the falls in the picture. VERY haiku of you!

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/4/2011 3:58:00 PM

With few words you've said what everyone's thinking. And soon at reception, they all will be drinking. And deep thoughts committed to life long betroth. The bridal veil just becomes another peice of cloth.

Kevin Clark

Date: 9/4/2011 10:55:00 AM

Short but sweet good luck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 5:49:00 AM

sara,i just did september brides... oh, this is a beauty, a fluid piece!.. winning wishes with huggs! :) nette

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/3/2011 8:40:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “I Love The Beauty of Pure Made Unions & What Could Be More Beautiful Than A Lovely Bride Standing At The Altar My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Sara! *^_^* Perhaps The Groom Is Considering How Quickly He Can Get His Bride Unto The Consummations Moment *^_#* Just A Thought & Very Beautiful Painting, My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Precious Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 6:16:00 PM

Very original Sara! Good luck as John judges. CR

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/3/2011 5:12:00 PM

oh this is such a thoughtful Crystaline, Sara. An ingenious piece of work,.is it for a contest? It would be a winner with me. ......and thanks for your welcome comments on People pleasing preacher