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Bride To Her Future Groom

You my love are a handsome piece of art
God of wisdom who captured my heart
Glory of joy and laughter set you apart 

In your presence they're like a blackout
Neither the moon nor the stars stand out
God of wisdom who captured my heart

Our love's forever let there be no doubt
My worship of you foretells a good start
Neither the moon nor the stars stand out

Life invites us as wedding bells call out
Promise of forever is what life is about
My worship of you foretells a good start

Walk hand in hand for a glorious start
Dance in harmony as music breaks out
Promise of forever is what life is about

Thoughts of future and family shout out
You my love are a handsome piece of art
Dance in harmony as music breaks out
Glory of joy and laughter set you apart 

Placed 7th
September 10, 2017
The Bride to her Future Groom
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Frances Schiavina Date: 10/9/2017 9:45:00 AM Well said Vijay and congratulations. Love is forever. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/9/2017 10:16:00 AM Thank you Frances!

James Inman Date: 10/9/2017 12:00:00 AM Nice write Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/9/2017 6:37:00 AM Thank you James!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 10/8/2017 3:46:00 AM Congratulations, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2017 5:56:00 AM Thank you Greg!

Eve Roper Date: 10/7/2017 8:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Vijay, beautiful write. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/7/2017 8:41:00 PM Thank you Eve!

Klio Tsitsikroni Date: 9/12/2017 2:28:00 AM "Promise of forever is what life is about". I believe in that. Lovely poem. Well done. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/12/2017 6:35:00 AM Thank you Kilo for your lovely comments!

Vasudevan Desikachari Date: 9/12/2017 12:05:00 AM 'promise of forever is what life is about' -truthful line indeed a nice piece of poetry Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/12/2017 6:34:00 AM Thank for your lovely feedback, Vasudevan!

Roxanne Dubarry Date: 9/11/2017 9:23:00 PM What a beautiful Christian memorable wedding poem. Their union will be richly blessed by God above as a token of their everlasting love. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/12/2017 6:33:00 AM Thank you for your lovely comments, Roxanne!

Ayesha Karim Date: 9/11/2017 8:32:00 PM This is an excellent poem about a storm like the storm ripping through Florida, Texas and parts of the Caribbean right now. I feel the emotion and intensity! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/12/2017 6:36:00 AM You meant the other poem-- Hurricanes--thank you Ayesha!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/11/2017 6:03:00 PM How precious this is, Vijay. I hope Shadow and her daughter enjoy reading it. (that is a contest I have yet to get going on) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 6:32:00 PM Thanks Andrea..looking forward to your poem.. I'm sure it will be lovely as ever!

Luis Estable Date: 9/11/2017 5:46:00 PM This is a good religious poem. The lines are not that powerful, but what they try to tell is meaningful and gives a decent reading. Thanks, Luis Estable Thank you much for becoming a follower. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 6:30:00 PM Thanks Luis for your feedback..appreciate your comments!

Jean Murray Date: 9/11/2017 5:25:00 PM This poem is a handsome piece of art Vijay. Tell me, what does CPA mean? Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/14/2017 2:13:00 PM I thought it must be Certified Poetic Achiever. Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 5:43:00 PM A CPA here means Certified Public Accountant..similar to a Chartered Accountant in the U.K. Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 5:35:00 PM So delighted by your visit Jean.. and thank you your lovely comments!

Heidi Sands Date: 9/11/2017 5:04:00 PM Excellent Terzanelle this is Vijay! A beautiful well written poem to read today. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 5:32:00 PM Such lovely comments from you Heidi.. no wonder I looked for your feedback all day.. many thanks!

Margaret Franceschini Date: 9/11/2017 4:47:00 PM beautifully written from your romantic heart. Best Wishes! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 5:01:00 PM Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comments!

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/11/2017 12:24:00 PM wow, i am in awe of your beautiful monologue, vijay!... huggs and soup mail Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 1:13:00 PM Thank you nette.. always love your thoughtful comments!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/11/2017 11:12:00 AM Oh! This is so lovely, Vijay! GL in contest! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 11:46:00 AM Thank you Kim for your wonderful feedback!

Kudzai Mhangwa Date: 9/11/2017 10:48:00 AM This is simply such a beautiful piece of work Vijay! It is so beautiful! I hope you win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 11:00:00 AM Delighted by your visit Kudzai--always appreciate your comments!

Tim Smith Date: 9/11/2017 10:01:00 AM Such sweet sentiments relayed Vijay...best wishes Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 11:00:00 AM Thank you Tim--love your feedback!

Emma Sivey Date: 9/11/2017 6:10:00 AM This is a lovely poem Vijay. I really liked it. You are a good poet. What is a Terzanelle? It looks hard. I see the pattern. Lovely. Emma :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 7:23:00 AM So lovely to hear from you Emma--love your comments! You and Russell are full of such joy and happiness--a mighty example of forever together! Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 7:23:00 AM A Terzanelle is a 19 line poem consisting of 5 triplets plus a concluding 4 line stanza. Middle line of each triplet is repeated as the third line in the following stanza. In addition, the first and the third line of the first triplet are repeated as the second and the final line of the the final four line stanza. Thank you for your visit and lovely comments!

Russell Sivey Date: 9/11/2017 5:13:00 AM What beauty you have written in every line here my friend! I surely loved reading your illustrious poem this morning! You have written such a delightful piece, what an amazing poem, Great work!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 7:10:00 AM You bring smile with your lovely comments Russell--appreciate your feedback--many thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/11/2017 4:13:00 AM - A beautiful recipe for how a marriage should be ... forever and ever ... or to death separates them - Love it, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 7:08:00 AM Lovely comments as always--much appreciated, Anne-Lise!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/10/2017 10:01:00 PM An outstanding Terzanelle Vijay! Best of luck in the contest! : ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 7:06:00 AM Thank you Connie for your awesome feedback!

Susan Ashley Date: 9/10/2017 6:43:00 PM A joyful and full of love and devotion poem Vijay. Very nicely put together, beautiful lines and imagery! Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/10/2017 6:56:00 PM Thank you Susan for your delightful comments. Love your thoughtful comments!