Bride

Beautiful white lace and Buoyant veil, a vision Beguiling as she walks, Borne on dreams, promising, Blushing and radiant, Beside her proud father, Betrothal bells ringing. Copyright, August 15, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/6/2016 6:38:00 AM

beautiful Faye, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:50:00 PM

this was really well done, Faye. Big congrats. Always love seeing you here.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2016 1:06:00 PM

You paint such a beautiful bridal vision, Faye! Let the bells ring for the happy occasion and for your fine win! Congratulations! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2016 4:21:00 AM

Faye...I love,love,love yours! Congratulations on your high placement! ; ) 7

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/20/2016 2:51:00 AM

Beautiful, just how a bride would be:) Congratulations on a great win, Faye:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2016 7:50:00 PM

Faye, congrats on your 3rd place win! I love your word choices as they perfectly described a bride! Beautiful! Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 6:09:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Faye - you painted a vivid picture in my mind:-) hugs Jan xx