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Laying brick by brick, with stickum in between. A stone on top of another: dream quest and scene, erected diligently, with a blueprint at the ready. Each dot and line progression is sure and steady. Despite storms, hurdles, and limited funding With slow but steady aims, slanted rashly cunning, with optimism, sharing in God's dream design. Adversity shapes us to strive rather than repine. God's will is a bunker, so every lesson is a brick His word is final, and the walls of the friary are thick Our foundation is the cornerstone of our existence Lord God, the ruler of men, smooths the essence. I savor being amazed; trust my full autonomy. A heart full of hope gives way to honesty. It's optimistic, soul-strengthening, and simple. We stir up lies, and our ignorance is sinful. Our love shrinks our hatred with each pulse. It's tough to stay aside; must veins convulse? I'm not sure what they'll do if we meet to shine. Our passion for each other will be closer to fine.
Written: February 16, 2023 Closer To Fine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 2/17/2023 5:54:00 AM
When a journey through adversity leads to success... nuggets of wisdom throughout my friend. Closer to fine is a good feeling in life when one has struggled for long. Best to you.
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Date: 2/17/2023 2:10:00 AM
- Las ... I will not use so many words on this poem ... it only needs one; Beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:47:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Loved its metaphors and imagery. You are a great builder.
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:32:00 PM
Each relationship is a slow and steady construction, brick on brick with cement to hold them together ! If trust is the brick, love is the cement ! With God's master plan the construction progresses and the relationship reaches closer to fine. Great penning.... dear friend ! I see a great winner here.
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Date: 2/16/2023 3:18:00 PM
Another beautiful poem! I know it's a winner!
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