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Brian's Couplet

Poetry in motion words fluid, falling like spring rain Animated verse set to music in my veins Wonderful composing carried away to the pages Complete this being, hear while poetry rages! Violin bow drawn perpendicular like passionate love's moan Words like passionate music, caress the heart's groan. For Brian Strand's contest, Thanks for the inspiration!! ~~~Recieved honorable mention in the contest~~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Doris. Sorry I am late with the comment. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/27/2010 8:43:00 AM

Congrats on your honorable win in this contest, Doris. Best wishes, Caroline.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 4:38:00 PM

I really love this one Doris. I would have had it in the top three. It is going into my favorites file. Congratulations on it being honored. Blessings, Connie I just got back from my trip to the mainland to visit my grandson for the first time.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2010 3:15:00 PM

Well, and a big congratulations to you ,Doris, for placing with this fine poem! LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 6:21:00 AM

Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. a wonderful write and a wonderful win from a most wonderful poet.. enjoy your special victory today.. luv.. and thankxxx for your many comments on my poetry always... blessings with luv.. Linda-Marie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/26/2010 5:32:00 AM

Bravo, Doris. Hear the drum rolls! You earned an honorable mention with your creative entry in the Poetry Soup member contest, POULTER'S MEASURE Sponsored by: Brian Strand with this wonderful poetic analogy. Well done! Smiles, Dane Ann

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/26/2010 1:58:00 AM

congratulations on your success with this fine poem Doris. well done...Margaret

Brian Strand

Date: 2/26/2010 12:20:00 AM

Congrats on you success in my contest Doris.Rgds Brian.My latest contest TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY is now open.

Brian Strand

Date: 2/20/2010 7:28:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Doris.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 6:26:00 AM

An enjoyable read and wonderful entry for the contest.. good luck.. but know it will be in the winners circle.. my entry is Resurrection... hope it fits Brian's criteria.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Susan Palli

Date: 2/20/2010 6:23:00 AM

I can hear the music

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2010 5:47:00 AM

Great short write that is very expressive and descriptive. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

John Freeman

Date: 2/19/2010 11:43:00 AM

I love your couplet Doris. Good luck in the contest. Sincere, Agape, Moses