Brewing Storm

This is lovely! .. Nowadays there are a lot of storms and disasters in many places.. :(

U pictured the hurricane in a superb way, in brevity too! Kudos! Oh poor sweet baby. Stay safe pal. Take care. Great to read frm u again.

Kim I enjoyed your wording and how you put these together to give it an earthly quality and a realalistic flare, it also has a haunting quality to it love the last two words baby cries, nice final touch that fits just right to this work, cheri

Oooooh I love it, and I can feel it! Fantastic!! Always, Laura

we have a new one bit didn;t hit manila.. thank God!.. well done 'ku, kim... ganda!.. huggs

Kim, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*

It appears there are two storm fronts, inside and outside.

- I do not like thunder me either - strong natural forces - A superb haiku, Kim! - I wish you a beautiful Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

OH....so sorry to hear about the imminent danger to the Philippines, dear. I hope you and your loved ones will be safe. This is a tremendous write....loved the ending. Thanks for your visits to my work. Hugs

Great haiku Kim... the last line i too good... or should i say the last two words... such a strong effect... #7

Excellent haiku. A pleasure to read....7

-slow clap- Wow ate Kim! Cool imagery :)

I will be praying for safety for everyone there Kim. Your haiku contains an impactful last word that adds such depth to your poem. 7

My lil girl and husband can sleep through anything but I'm up at the first bang of thunder. I enjoyed your haiku sweetie hugsxx

excellent Kim...oh I was unaware of this storm...I am praying for all...be safe Tim

Great imagery, so much said in just three lines. Thank you

a beast of a storm breaking the rule . . . Never wake a sleeping baby!! I loved the twist at the end. Well done Ms. Nunez 7