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BREWING STORM

clouds cover the moon 
          thunder shatters the silence   -
                frightened baby cries













09 MAY 2015
Kim Patrice Nunez

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/15/2015 10:00:00 AM
This is lovely! .. Nowadays there are a lot of storms and disasters in many places.. :(
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:44:00 AM
U pictured the hurricane in a superb way, in brevity too! Kudos! Oh poor sweet baby. Stay safe pal. Take care. Great to read frm u again.
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Date: 5/11/2015 12:40:00 AM
Kim I enjoyed your wording and how you put these together to give it an earthly quality and a realalistic flare, it also has a haunting quality to it love the last two words baby cries, nice final touch that fits just right to this work, cheri
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:47:00 PM
Oooooh I love it, and I can feel it! Fantastic!! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:18:00 PM
we have a new one bit didn;t hit manila.. thank God!.. well done 'ku, kim... ganda!.. huggs
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:44:00 AM
Kim, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:28:00 AM
It appears there are two storm fronts, inside and outside.
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:39:00 AM
- I do not like thunder me either - strong natural forces - A superb haiku, Kim! - I wish you a beautiful Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 11:04:00 PM
OH....so sorry to hear about the imminent danger to the Philippines, dear. I hope you and your loved ones will be safe. This is a tremendous write....loved the ending. Thanks for your visits to my work. Hugs
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Date: 5/9/2015 11:02:00 PM
Great haiku Kim... the last line i too good... or should i say the last two words... such a strong effect... #7
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:24:00 PM
Excellent haiku. A pleasure to read....7
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:05:00 PM
-slow clap- Wow ate Kim! Cool imagery :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:53:00 PM
Kim, as a nature write you work is thrilling.. But your last two words take it to stunning! Best haiku I've read today.. This is exceptional!
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:19:00 PM
I will be praying for safety for everyone there Kim. Your haiku contains an impactful last word that adds such depth to your poem. 7
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:52:00 PM
My lil girl and husband can sleep through anything but I'm up at the first bang of thunder. I enjoyed your haiku sweetie hugsxx
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:20:00 PM
excellent Kim...oh I was unaware of this storm...I am praying for all...be safe Tim
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:17:00 PM
a beast of a storm breaking the rule . . . Never wake a sleeping baby!! I loved the twist at the end. Well done Ms. Nunez 7
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David Meade
Date: 5/9/2015 5:31:00 PM
I am honored my dear -- I am called Storm Chaser, I do like a good storm but only if no one is hurt. I will be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers . . . be safe. I will keep my eye on Dodong. Hugs
Date: 5/9/2015 5:17:00 PM
Great imagery, so much said in just three lines. Thank you
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