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Brett and Rhett - Nursery Rhyme

Messy twins Brett and Rhett Having fun playing with mud Squatting and crawling Diving and falling In ooey gooey mud Brett is sitting facing Rhett Rhett spatters some muck On Brett's left cheek Brett spatters more muck On Rhett's right cheek Head to toe dipped in slush Brett and Rhett laughing with glee Playing with the sludge Squelching and squishing Sloshing and splashing The sticky slimy mud Date: 04/19/2021 Submitted for: Nursery Rhyme 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/27/2021 7:31:00 PM
What a poem with fun-filled lines. A big big congratulations to you.
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Date: 4/24/2021 8:21:00 AM
Messy, messy, but that's why it's fun! Congrats on your win, Anitha! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/23/2021 8:28:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/23/2021 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anitha. A cute nursery rhyme - kids love playing with mud. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/23/2021 12:06:00 PM
Anitha, children love mud and muddy puddles and throwing mud at each other,it is so cute to watch and you capture these moments in your terrific poem! Congratulations my friend on your awesome win, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/20/2021 9:58:00 PM
Love Brett and Rhett, awesome nursery rhyme Anitha :)
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Date: 4/20/2021 9:04:00 PM
excellent the rhyme is
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Date: 4/19/2021 8:09:00 PM
Oh this is so cute!! kids would love this! Best wishes Ani..
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Date: 4/19/2021 12:04:00 PM
Hello Anitha, it sounds like they were having fun. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:18:00 AM
sounds like they are a mucky pair lol:-) hugs jan xx
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