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Brenda

Beautiful ,Bold, Brilliant Brenda Imagination goddess, queen of the pen again beautiful Brenda brings another imaginary character to life a brown beard boatman but Brenda faced cold nights awake there were mornings Brenda's brush bristles never touched her teeth pleasures and sleep she stabbed just for her enormous characters to live but of them all, brown beard boatman has got all of beautiful Brenda's breath If only imaginations could turn real and Brenda's breath could meet with her brown beard boatman on the bridge of their lips brushing, bathing, breathing, BRENDA never wishes more, only if her boatman could be by her side. _____________________________________________ September 20, 2016. Contest name, BRENDA Sponsor , JULIA WARD

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Date: 9/24/2016 8:03:00 AM
- A great described poem, well done Abosede ! - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/24/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thanks friend, your visit is always appreciated.
Date: 9/23/2016 1:27:00 AM
You compose these very well and excellent, my friend Abosede. The alliteration within is apparent. I hope it wins the contest, good luck..........A.M.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/24/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Afolabi, and for your wishes...God bless you friend.
Date: 9/22/2016 3:04:00 PM
what a nice job you did with this unusual challenge! good luck in the contest, Abosede
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/24/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, God bless.
Date: 9/20/2016 9:33:00 AM
You did very well with this type of poem I'm afraid I could not get my head round it, well done and thank you for your great comment on my bees xxxx
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/21/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Wendy. And it's always a pleasure to stop by and read your poems too.

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