Abosede Ogundare Poet Alliteration

Brenda

Beautiful ,Bold, Brilliant Brenda 
Imagination goddess, queen of the pen 
again beautiful Brenda brings another imaginary character to life 
a brown beard boatman 
but Brenda faced cold nights awake 
there were mornings Brenda's brush bristles never touched her teeth
pleasures and sleep she stabbed just for her enormous characters to live 
but of them all, brown beard boatman has got all of beautiful Brenda's breath
If only imaginations could turn real and Brenda's breath could meet with her brown beard boatman on the bridge of their lips  
brushing, bathing,  breathing, BRENDA never wishes more, only if her boatman could be by her side. 
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    September 20, 2016.
    Contest name, BRENDA
     Sponsor , JULIA WARD

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Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2016 at 8:03 AM - A great described poem, well done Abosede ! - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Abosede Ogundare September 24, 2016 at 9:19 AM Thanks friend, your visit is always appreciated.

Afolabi Muideen September 23, 2016 at 1:27 AM You compose these very well and excellent, my friend Abosede. The alliteration within is apparent. I hope it wins the contest, good luck..........A.M. Abosede Ogundare September 24, 2016 at 8:00 AM Thanks so much Afolabi, and for your wishes...God bless you friend.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2016 at 3:04 PM what a nice job you did with this unusual challenge! good luck in the contest, Abosede Abosede Ogundare September 24, 2016 at 8:01 AM Thanks Andrea, God bless.

Wendy Rycroft September 20, 2016 at 9:33 AM You did very well with this type of poem I'm afraid I could not get my head round it, well done and thank you for your great comment on my bees xxxx Abosede Ogundare September 21, 2016 at 8:26 AM Thanks for your kind words Wendy. And it's always a pleasure to stop by and read your poems too.