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Breezes On the Lake

Breezes on the 

lake causing

ripples all across,

green leaves covering

trees, bringing me

a great spring feeling.


Written 5-27-11

happinessfree verse

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/3/2011 1:23:00 PM

enjoying the refreshing (feel of this James)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2011 10:08:00 PM

relishing this piece with much serenity in my heart, james.... i flow with your breeze! wowie poem..:) hugggs, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2011 5:04:00 PM

The spring feeling is a great one..Here in the south we have bounced into summer with temps in the upper 90 and even 100..Very uncomfortable heat and humidity..It looks like rain outside now and I hope that it comes bringing some cooling..Enjoyed reading your great work..Your presence at my work is uplifting.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/29/2011 12:25:00 PM

James we are enjoying the ocean breeze the next few days in 90 plus degrees just loving it as much as these delicate lines u penned my friend..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2011 9:51:00 AM

Good afternoon James, a well enjoyed refreshing and beautiful poem... you take care.. God bless,..p.d.

Red Fiery

Date: 5/29/2011 9:38:00 AM

Very beautiful description of spring :-) . I admire the way you composed it .

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/29/2011 5:05:00 AM

James , this is what I call a keeper , simplicity at it's best. A poem that will be remembered.Wonderful . Anne

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/28/2011 9:52:00 PM

Ahh, love the spring. Great job buddy!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 9:36:00 PM

Wonderful imagery here James.Enjoyed...

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/28/2011 9:11:00 PM

Great imagery here, James! Thanks for sharing your love of Spring in its many forms. And thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Best wishes, Caroline.

James Fraser

Date: 5/28/2011 4:01:00 PM

The prospering canopies of greens being hushed by a spring breeze. It's enlightening to witness, rays beaming through her trees. In two months time she'll be in blooming green flow, as all around abounds in seasonal grow. Wonderful free verse James - I love it....:)