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Breeze Through Poetry

Amidst the chitter chatter, The cool breeze blows, In the hubbub of life, Poetry freely flows; Listen to its sweet murmur, Reaching you through the din, As the breeze touches you, Tingling your skin; Jot down the soft words, Slowly as they come, Smile as it refreshes you, In this dull humdrum. 08/22/18

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Date: 9/1/2018 2:45:00 PM
OH, Jo, would that it were that easy. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2018 2:49:00 PM
jo, a pleasure to read you again... smooth, vibrant poem which grows in me...huggs
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Date: 8/26/2018 3:22:00 PM
This is brilliant...You said it so poetically..
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Date: 8/24/2018 12:50:00 PM
Oh, yes! Love it, Jo! A fave!
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Date: 8/23/2018 10:40:00 AM
Very nice Jo, poetry does have a way of cheering us up, as your poem also does!
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:17:00 AM
Beautifully uplifting and happy. This poem could cheer up the saddest heart. Wonderful message Jo.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:07:00 AM
So sweet. I love it! xomo :))
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Date: 8/23/2018 6:42:00 AM
Soft, breezy, and uplifting thoughts..great ingredients for a wonderful day..well written poem, Jo.
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