Breeze Poetry

Written: April 19, 2024
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A whirl in motion.
In a world of vibrant hues, 
a dream so rich and true. 
visions of colors, bold and bright, 
A sight to behold.
pure delight.
a fleeting existence.
a comely moment, 
that dawned in the distance.

Colored crayons, 
a pulsating candle hue.
a burst of color, glistening
in the morning light.
enchanting auras 
A painting is encircled.
A gentle breeze carries
whispered secrets.
crimson elixir, swirling divine.
Whispering scarlet breezes.

Whispers, whisking away sorrow.
marigolds and azaleas
Amaryllis dances in the breeze.
beneath soft, pale green trees
Bees dance through the air.
A swing gently sways, 
A girl in flight
A scent dances. 
by her flowing locks.

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Valsa George

April 20, 2024 at 8:56 AM

I can feel the breath of breeze on my face. When we saunter into nature, we get mesmerized by the wind and the flowers swaying in breeze. Then all our sorrows melt away and our hearts turn calm and joyous. "Whispers, whisking away sorrow. marigolds and azaleas Amaryllis dances in the breeze. beneath soft, pale green trees Bees dance through the air." I see it all. The image of the girl on the swing whose curls are tickled by the breeze, adds to the beauty of the poem. I felt as if rambling through a countryside. Lovely poem, dear friend.