Breeze Poetry

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Written: April 19, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A whirl in motion. In a world of vibrant hues, a dream so rich and true. visions of colors, bold and bright, A sight to behold. pure delight. a fleeting existence. a comely moment, that dawned in the distance. Colored crayons, a pulsating candle hue. a burst of color, glistening in the morning light. enchanting auras A painting is encircled. A gentle breeze carries whispered secrets. crimson elixir, swirling divine. Whispering scarlet breezes. Whispers, whisking away sorrow. marigolds and azaleas Amaryllis dances in the breeze. beneath soft, pale green trees Bees dance through the air. A swing gently sways, A girl in flight A scent dances. by her flowing locks.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/20/2024 8:56:00 AM

I can feel the breath of breeze on my face. When we saunter into nature, we get mesmerized by the wind and the flowers swaying in breeze. Then all our sorrows melt away and our hearts turn calm and joyous. "Whispers, whisking away sorrow. marigolds and azaleas Amaryllis dances in the breeze. beneath soft, pale green trees Bees dance through the air." I see it all. The image of the girl on the swing whose curls are tickled by the breeze, adds to the beauty of the poem. I felt as if rambling through a countryside. Lovely poem, dear friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/19/2024 3:39:00 PM

As a nature lover, I found your poem a delightful read. You've captured the beautiful things a breeze does from carrying scents across the room to whispering secrets. I especially liked the images in the last verse: amaryllis dances in the breeze...bees dance...a scent dances. As I read your poem I imagined a gentle breeze entering my office. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend i Texas, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 4/19/2024 9:44:00 AM

"I enjoyed reading your lovely poem on breeze. Enjoy your day writing away............."