Sam Jameson Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking

Beleaguer me with beaten breaths as I burn long beyond this dalliance of love,
Remind me with a rush of redolent-rippled candy kisses draped across my lips--
Enchant me with a tickle of your tempest as you transcend my tepid tranquility,
Attacking my dank demure with your deliciously decadent defiance to my doubt--
Tiptoe your ebullient eyes through thick doleful curtains drawn atop my trust,     
Helping to lather my lassitude with your lustrous elixir-like gaze that slays me--
Tempt my desires with your tender touch as you whisper passion into my veins,
Aching to unravel into your snowy soft embrace at a falling feather's descent--   
Kill the messenger that meddles in my mind preventing me from your seduction,
Imbibing me in sensual serenity as we get lost climbing sky-bound staircases--
Never stop the theft of my breath for I promise you troves after each idyllic kiss,
Granting you all the love that my lungs can hold as you fix me with your bliss--


March 10, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 5:59 PM Sam, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA Sam Jameson March 15, 2016 at 6:53 PM ;) Thank you, Linda-- always great to feel your support. Enjoy your night.

Timothy Hicks March 15, 2016 at 2:14 AM What an intensely passionate piece of poetry, Sam. Many things to admire, like the great use of alliteration, and the sky-bound staircases. Hope this did well as I have not actually checked the status of this contest. Sam Jameson March 15, 2016 at 5:31 AM Thank you, Tim. I appreciate the insightful feedback on the work-- I always like to hear what stands out in the words to the reader (good or bad).. Yes this piece connected quite well and was able to take top honors so I was very happy with the result. Always an added bonus to the creative process ;) Have a great day my friend.

Sathya Babu March 13, 2016 at 8:52 PM Sam......This is a lovely write.Many congrats on your WIN. Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 10:34 PM Thank you, Sathya-- very kind of you to stop in with your kind remark. I'm very happy that you enjoyed the read, appreciate the feedback my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong March 13, 2016 at 7:09 PM Congratulations on your first place win Silent. I can tell you put a lot into it! #7 ; ) Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM It was your poem I was commenting on Sam, just wrote Silents name by mistake. I do that all the time to my kids. They don't complain because they do it too....the apple doesn't fall far. Lol. Sorry about that. Cheers, Connie Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 10:39 PM I'm sure it was an honest mix-up so I'll accept your congratulations on behalf of Silent One, but I hope you liked mine above as well ;) Thank you though Connie for dropping by with kind remarks, I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

Constance La France March 13, 2016 at 5:07 PM Sam, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful placement !!! Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 6:49 PM Thank you, Constance :) Your kind remarks mean a lot-- enjoy your night.

Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 1:15 PM Sam, congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest! -luloo Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:39 PM Very nice of you to say, luloo! thanks for the kind words, I appreciate your comments :)

Charlie Smith March 13, 2016 at 1:04 PM Congratulations Sam, great write... Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:38 PM thank you, Charlie-- I appreciate you swinging back in to drop off a handshake..very kind of you. Thanks for the kind feedback also-- have a great day.

Sandra Haight March 13, 2016 at 10:23 AM Exquisite, Sam! Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Sandra Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:34 PM Thank you, Sandra! I am very happy you enjoyed the read-- I really appreciate your kind words. I hope you are having a wonderful day my friend :)

Jan Allison March 13, 2016 at 6:35 AM WOW Sam this truly is breathtaking many congrats on your win this is absolutely stunning:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:36 PM A very kind compliment, Jan-- thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the work..it means a lot to hear that the readers found some excitement and joy in the words. Enjoy your day!

John Hamilton March 12, 2016 at 10:22 PM This was just perfect Sam I thoroughly enjoyed it 34/34. Wonderful entry congratulations on your stand alone win! John Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:33 PM This is wonderful, thank you John! I'm very happy that the work was able to connect with your expectations so well-- I really enjoyed creating this piece so I must thank you for sponsoring this contest, and for the placement...I'm honored :)

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2016 at 8:42 PM wow,, that is ONE passionate and beautifully expressed love poem that fits the theme to a Tee!! Excellent work. Sam Jameson March 12, 2016 at 8:37 AM Thank you, Andrea, for your kind comment on the work-- I really appreciate the insight. Glad you enjoyed the read some-- have a wonderful day my friend :)

Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 5:16 PM Sam, your breathless acrostic is wonderfully penned, very nice and I am loving this 7 ~ Sam Jameson March 11, 2016 at 6:03 PM Very kind of you to say Constance-- thank you for the comment on the work, it is humbly appreciated my friend :)

Charlie Smith March 11, 2016 at 12:06 PM Great work Sam. This piece will be hard to top...Charlie Sam Jameson March 11, 2016 at 12:48 PM We'll see Charlie.. lots of talented writers in these parts ;) Just happy to create something that was able to leave a mark. Thank you for this kind comment-- it means a lot. Enjoy your day my friend.

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2016 at 10:18 AM And we have a winner! As far as I'm concerned this is a poet's poem, each line beautiful prose and mind-catching descriptions - very unique and touching. In my opinion, this is one of the best poems I have read on this site. I LOVE IT. Fav and a 7 ... CayCay Sam Jameson March 11, 2016 at 12:42 PM Wow-- thank you CayCay...I don't know if I can accept all that compliment without blushing. I am very happy that this work was able to connect so well-- I am still finding my way with verse but it feels nice to know that sometimes the words bring joy to others :) Thank you for this wonderful praise-- I hope you have a wonderful day!