Breathtaking
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Blissful, stunning, BEAUTIFUL is my dream- where I am lost in a green
rainforest, d r i p p i n g , and lush. Sultry with mist and haze, and
echoing is a tiger's roar hidden. For a moment it silences the BIRDS
and then, they resume their rambling beautiful s o n g
tenfold. A purple butterfly drifts by and I push aside wet magnificent leaves
hypnotised by the amazing foliage. I see that on my arm are many vines
twining. In the BREATHLESS hush, my long t a n g l e d hair is billowing
as I travel on s e a r c h i n g in my wondrous steamy journey
knowing, that the rainforest's curious creatures are watching me, oh
incredible is a BLUE hissing snake and an amazing little orange frog
nourishing itself on a w e t ravaged leave. My mind is alive with thoughts,
glorious and astounding. Words are creeping with rapture, to my dripping pen.
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March 10, 2016
Submitted to the contest,
Second Place Only Contest III,
sponsor, Laura Loo
First Place
For the contest, Breathtaking,
sponsor, John Hamilton
(Judged March 12, 2016)
Second Place
Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2016
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