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Breathtaking

Breathtaking Emotions swirling Flying in a whirl Sensations anticipating Nerves in a tangle Tingling Butterflies dancing Head in the clouds Enjoying the moment Melting Soaring higher Loving you So magical Thrillingly beautiful Awe-inspiring Yearning wanting Cherishing each other Full of happiness Satisfaction Desirable pleasure Never ending Keeps on growing Gaining strength So intense My love for you Continuously Takes my breath away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/9/2016 4:05:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Pam
Date: 2/7/2016 9:50:00 AM
It flows like the currents of life with a dramatic crispness that teeters on the brink of reality and fantasy. Well written. Emile.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 3/3/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Emile for your kind words
Date: 2/6/2016 5:58:00 AM
It flows like a melody with a beautiful ending.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 2/6/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Elaine
Date: 2/5/2016 8:58:00 PM
Enthusiastically written. Good job, Gail
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Gail Underwood
Date: 2/5/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, appreciate your feedback
Date: 2/5/2016 8:43:00 PM
Nice job, congrats!
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Gail Underwood
Date: 2/5/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you