Gail Underwood Poet Free verse

Breathtaking

Breathtaking 

Emotions swirling
Flying in a whirl
Sensations anticipating
Nerves in a tangle 
Tingling 
Butterflies dancing
Head in the clouds
Enjoying the moment
Melting
Soaring higher
Loving you
So magical
Thrillingly beautiful
Awe-inspiring
Yearning wanting
Cherishing each other
Full of happiness
Satisfaction
Desirable pleasure
Never ending
Keeps on growing
Gaining strength
So intense
My love for you
Continuously 
Takes my breath away

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Pam Deremer March 9, 2016 at 4:05 PM I really enjoyed your poem. Gail Underwood April 3, 2016 at 6:55 AM Thank you Pam

Emile Pinet February 7, 2016 at 9:50 AM It flows like the currents of life with a dramatic crispness that teeters on the brink of reality and fantasy. Well written. Emile. Gail Underwood March 3, 2016 at 4:28 AM Thank you Emile for your kind words

Elaine George February 6, 2016 at 5:58 AM It flows like a melody with a beautiful ending. Gail Underwood February 6, 2016 at 3:50 PM Thank you Elaine

Daniel Turner February 5, 2016 at 8:58 PM Enthusiastically written. Good job, Gail Gail Underwood February 5, 2016 at 9:01 PM Thank you Daniel, appreciate your feedback

Edward Ebbs February 5, 2016 at 8:43 PM Nice job, congrats! Gail Underwood February 5, 2016 at 8:52 PM Thank you