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Breathlet

Source breath from droplets Saturate a desert far beyond closed eyes Net of trickle capsules beryline Downward melting dunes reveal A soft edged citadel Wobbling stones malleable on gaze Domed in sun with eyes as satellites Centred, still and clear Bands of nomadic virtues Cascading round green crystal urns Grain worn skulls of vultures sit In the shade of cooling blue hued ferns Pansphere curving inward Calm crest mists and sheens The bowl's song permeates the mountain Sweeps away the gathered leaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/15/2024 2:52:00 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:22:00 PM
ROB, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:30:00 PM
ROB, Wonderful imagery, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:40:00 PM
Makes me think of an oasis and the creatures all working their way towards a meal. A nice pen. ~Kilmer
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