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Breathless Sighs

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Among delicate sirenic chants of amorous love birds,
charming Clematises thrive within their flower garden,
composing succulent symphonies alongside Honeysuckle,
seduced by the sweet scent of blossoming bright Jasmine.
Thirsting for nutrient rain to quench their breathless sighs. 

Silent One
13 June 2018

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Melissa Tracy

Date: 10/23/2018 9:17:00 AM

Stirs so many senses to life...Beautiful

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/15/2018 1:31:00 PM

Lovely !

Al Juman

Date: 7/4/2018 12:05:00 PM

very, very, very Good my friend

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/27/2018 2:58:00 PM

This contains such beauty Silent. I especially love your ending line! : )

Lyric Man

Date: 6/20/2018 1:49:00 PM

SO.. I love the brilliance of this romantic piece. Like a piece of art, your write can be interpreted from so many angles each with their own interesting conclusion!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/18/2018 4:05:00 PM

Love is in the air, it seems. It is that time of year. Your words drip with beauty, a touch of playfulness. Breathless sighs indeed. ~ Maia

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 6/17/2018 8:44:00 AM

wonderful lines , Dear Silence Thirsting for nutrient rain to quench their breathless sighs

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/16/2018 9:55:00 AM

The depth of sensitive beauty in your imagery, the bright glints of alliteration and the emotion expressed in your last line make me breathless, Silent One. A wondrous write! Warmest wishes always my talented friend.. ~Susan

Jean Murray

Date: 6/15/2018 4:03:00 PM

Wonderful!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/14/2018 10:00:00 PM

Another great composition by Truly Talented Poet. Blessing.

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/14/2018 11:14:00 AM

Great alliteration SO, well done...

Alfred Berggren

Date: 6/14/2018 10:47:00 AM

A flower garden is for sure a place of beauty. Each flower has it's own wonder. Your poem sure captures that truth.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2018 7:46:00 AM

wow... i am drooling here with this gem of a piece, S.O... hope i can do one for you.. huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/13/2018 6:25:00 PM

Sooo beautiful, Silent One. All of the images are well defined and the elegance of the words is complimented by bits of well-employed alliteration. You leave the reader with a "breathless sigh." Hugs, Carolyn

Roy Pett

Date: 6/13/2018 6:15:00 PM

Absolutely amazing piece of poetry SO, inspirational example and a joy to read. :))

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/13/2018 5:32:00 PM

Quenched my thirst for the wonders of a garden painted in words, virtual reality explored! Mick

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/13/2018 5:23:00 PM

Your well chosen words climbing high in the realm of poetry ornamenting your thriving lines exquisitely! Your poem a wealth of music, beauty, love and life. A great pleasure to read. Stay blessed Silent One.