Silent One Poet Free verse

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Breathless Sighs

Among delicate sirenic chants of amorous love birds,
charming Clematises thrive within their flower garden,
composing succulent symphonies alongside Honeysuckle,
seduced by the sweet scent of blossoming bright Jasmine.
Thirsting for nutrient rain to quench their breathless sighs. 

Silent One
13 June 2018

Example for When line five enables your poem to thrive

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Melissa Tracy October 23, 2018 at 9:17 AM Stirs so many senses to life...Beautiful

Charmaine Chircop July 15, 2018 at 1:31 PM Lovely !

Al Juman July 4, 2018 at 12:05 PM very, very, very Good my friend

Connie Marcum Wong June 27, 2018 at 2:58 PM This contains such beauty Silent. I especially love your ending line! : )

Lyric Man June 20, 2018 at 1:49 PM SO.. I love the brilliance of this romantic piece. Like a piece of art, your write can be interpreted from so many angles each with their own interesting conclusion!

Brandy Nicole June 18, 2018 at 4:05 PM Love is in the air, it seems. It is that time of year. Your words drip with beauty, a touch of playfulness. Breathless sighs indeed. ~ Maia

Muhammad Imtiaz June 17, 2018 at 8:44 AM wonderful lines , Dear Silence Thirsting for nutrient rain to quench their breathless sighs

Susan Ashley June 16, 2018 at 9:55 AM The depth of sensitive beauty in your imagery, the bright glints of alliteration and the emotion expressed in your last line make me breathless, Silent One. A wondrous write! Warmest wishes always my talented friend.. ~Susan

Jean Murray June 15, 2018 at 4:03 PM Wonderful!

Anisha Dutta June 14, 2018 at 10:00 PM Another great composition by Truly Talented Poet. Blessing.

Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 11:14 AM Great alliteration SO, well done...

Alfred Berggren June 14, 2018 at 10:47 AM A flower garden is for sure a place of beauty. Each flower has it's own wonder. Your poem sure captures that truth.

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2018 at 7:46 AM wow... i am drooling here with this gem of a piece, S.O... hope i can do one for you.. huggs

Carolyn Devonshire June 13, 2018 at 6:25 PM Sooo beautiful, Silent One. All of the images are well defined and the elegance of the words is complimented by bits of well-employed alliteration. You leave the reader with a "breathless sigh." Hugs, Carolyn

Roy Pett June 13, 2018 at 6:15 PM Absolutely amazing piece of poetry SO, inspirational example and a joy to read. :))

Mick Talbot June 13, 2018 at 5:32 PM Quenched my thirst for the wonders of a garden painted in words, virtual reality explored! Mick

Besma Riabi Dziri June 13, 2018 at 5:23 PM Your well chosen words climbing high in the realm of poetry ornamenting your thriving lines exquisitely! Your poem a wealth of music, beauty, love and life. A great pleasure to read. Stay blessed Silent One.

Agnes Krampe June 13, 2018 at 3:40 PM Awesome alliterations :)

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2018 at 3:15 PM A poetic masterpiece SO and a brilliant example to (try) and follow.. Tom

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2018 at 2:54 PM A lovely model poem for your new contest, Silent One. Thanks for these nice contests you are having.

Vijay Pandit June 13, 2018 at 12:50 PM Your poem thrives as always..with or without the fifth line..well adorned with choice words. Great work, Silent One.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 11:31 AM - A beautiful example to follow for your new contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France June 13, 2018 at 10:32 AM Silent, this is so beautifully penned and a great example for your contest ...

Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 10:08 AM Sounds like a wonderful aphrodisiac, SO. Well penned.

Winged Warrior June 13, 2018 at 10:05 AM Exquisite dear Silent...you are the master mentor my friend...love & light...^WW^

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