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Breathless Moments

While his knees gave way Her frown turns into a smile Breathing heavily She gazed at him lovingly Walking into his embrace

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/8/2010 2:00:00 AM

ooh this sure lends such an air of relief!! breathless moments indeed ;) and darn-- sneaky sandman-- I suppose he went back to the beach??? gosh probably visited sandcastles over there lol --so you slept 3 hours-- hahahaha what is happening????

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/5/2010 8:43:00 AM

Saucy Girlfriend. these are like mini film clips you need to put them together and we will have the full story.

Raj Nandy

Date: 9/2/2010 4:57:00 AM

WILMA , THOSE FOUR LINES DOES MAKE THE READER BREATHLESS FOR A MOMENT ! kINDLY give your comments on my Inca Mail Runners , when you get time ! BEST WISHES , -Raj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 4:58:00 PM

Well of course I just HAD to come back and read this again..its so perfect for the "Sweetheart" ...new favorite too..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 12:35:00 PM

Wilma, thank you for taking the time to actually read and understand my "dance" poem. It was not meant to be "fun" or "funny" as some others have suggested. You understood it correctly and I'm very grateful that at least you and Barbara G. were able to see it as it was intended. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 6:06:00 AM

Romantic and passionate, dear friend. It's wonderful to have someone who makes you feel this way! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2010 2:31:00 AM

beautiful form and a wonderful poem that fits neatly into it, love this Wilma. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2010 11:06:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one, Wilma. How is it in Africa today?

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/31/2010 2:37:00 PM

Nice Tanke luv.... very tempting to a man half way around the world from you....always pleasure to read....Luv Michael

James Fraser

Date: 8/31/2010 1:57:00 PM

Tempting Tanka Wilma, warm and loving > sleep snug >> James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 8/31/2010 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for the comments. Sorry it takes a while as I'm incarcerated and I correspond by postal mail.. Thanks again. ....Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2010 9:12:00 AM

Powerhouse Poetry Ms. Wilma.. my kinda read.. enjoyed and u captured the esence of a passionate moment.. wow.. luv it.. glad u luv the photos.. we are still on cloud 9 ..luv..