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Breathless Moments

While his knees gave way  
Her frown turns into a smile
Breathing heavily 
She gazed at him lovingly
Walking into his embrace

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 8, 2010 at 2:00 AM

ooh this sure lends such an air of relief!! breathless moments indeed ;) and darn-- sneaky sandman-- I suppose he went back to the beach??? gosh probably visited sandcastles over there lol --so you slept 3 hours-- hahahaha what is happening????

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

September 5, 2010 at 8:43 AM

Saucy Girlfriend. these are like mini film clips you need to put them together and we will have the full story.

Raj Nandy

September 2, 2010 at 4:57 AM

WILMA , THOSE FOUR LINES DOES MAKE THE READER BREATHLESS FOR A MOMENT ! kINDLY give your comments on my Inca Mail Runners , when you get time ! BEST WISHES , -Raj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2010 at 4:58 PM

Well of course I just HAD to come back and read this again..its so perfect for the "Sweetheart" ...new favorite too..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

September 1, 2010 at 12:35 PM

Wilma, thank you for taking the time to actually read and understand my "dance" poem. It was not meant to be "fun" or "funny" as some others have suggested. You understood it correctly and I'm very grateful that at least you and Barbara G. were able to see it as it was intended. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

September 1, 2010 at 6:06 AM

Romantic and passionate, dear friend. It's wonderful to have someone who makes you feel this way! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

September 1, 2010 at 2:31 AM

beautiful form and a wonderful poem that fits neatly into it, love this Wilma. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2010 at 11:06 PM

I enjoyed reading this one, Wilma. How is it in Africa today?

Michael J. Falotico

August 31, 2010 at 2:37 PM

Nice Tanke luv.... very tempting to a man half way around the world from you....always pleasure to read....Luv Michael

James Fraser

August 31, 2010 at 1:57 PM

Tempting Tanka Wilma, warm and loving > sleep snug >> James

Jimmy Anderson

August 31, 2010 at 9:36 AM

Thanks for the comments. Sorry it takes a while as I'm incarcerated and I correspond by postal mail.. Thanks again. ....Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 31, 2010 at 9:12 AM

Powerhouse Poetry Ms. Wilma.. my kinda read.. enjoyed and u captured the esence of a passionate moment.. wow.. luv it.. glad u luv the photos.. we are still on cloud 9 ..luv..