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Breathless Love

breathless waits my heart for your velvet touch of love my eyes seek fire ethereal song answers hearts first melody anticipating a bouquet of sweets kisses tied with a ribbon my love beckons me fingers graze my cheek hungry lips kiss fingertips petals opening passion finds embrace moans of delight cradle love always in your arms
Poets Statement Finding love is a natural quest...once found the romance comes alive through your lovers' embrace. I think that being with someone for a long time means you become more comfortable and safe and can be free to express your love. Multiple-Haikus Poetry Contest 3rd Place Topic: Love Written 7-20-2019 Sponsor: Jamie Pan syllables checked through PS syllable counter

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Date: 8/26/2019 10:04:00 AM
Excellent works. It awakens senses.
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Date: 8/20/2019 6:32:00 AM
passionate, sensual series senyru. kudos are in order.
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Date: 8/20/2019 2:06:00 AM
Jeanne, I really enjoyed reading.... “petals opening” beautiful imagery
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Date: 8/19/2019 7:51:00 PM
this is beautifully crafted...it tells a story from start to end...congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 7/23/2019 5:39:00 PM
magnificent, Jeanne. I bet this one is a winner (not mine, for sure!!)
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/23/2019 7:13:00 PM
I don't know...I always see you on the podium! Best of luck too...
Date: 7/22/2019 12:24:00 PM
Lovely--and sizzlin' hot, Jeanne! Janice
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/23/2019 7:12:00 PM
My dreams in the night...lol
Date: 7/22/2019 5:40:00 AM
The entire missive is gorgeous, but this appealed to me the most: "ethereal song answers hearts first melody anticipating" Lovely!
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/22/2019 9:32:00 AM
You are a true romantic Caren!
Date: 7/21/2019 11:21:00 AM
My favorite part, Jeanne: hungry lips kiss fingertips/petals opening
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/21/2019 12:14:00 PM
like a rose the lips do touch...xoxo
Date: 7/21/2019 9:45:00 AM
A beautiful sensual string of haiku, well penned Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/21/2019 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan.