Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Breathless Love

breathless waits my heart
for your velvet touch of love
my eyes seek fire

ethereal song
answers hearts first melody
anticipating

a bouquet of sweets
kisses tied with a ribbon
my love beckons me

fingers graze my cheek 
hungry lips kiss fingertips
petals opening

passion finds embrace
moans of delight cradle love
always in your arms



Poets Statement

Finding love is a natural quest...once found the romance comes alive through your lovers' embrace.  I think that being with someone for a long time means you become more comfortable and safe and can be free to express your love.

Multiple-Haikus Poetry Contest  3rd Place
Topic:  Love
Written 7-20-2019
Sponsor:  Jamie Pan
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Kilalo Mwashighadi August 26, 2019 at 10:04 AM Excellent works. It awakens senses.

Reason A. Poteet August 20, 2019 at 6:32 AM passionate, sensual series senyru. kudos are in order.

Georgia Kereopa August 20, 2019 at 2:06 AM Jeanne, I really enjoyed reading.... “petals opening” beautiful imagery

Sandra Adams August 19, 2019 at 7:51 PM this is beautifully crafted...it tells a story from start to end...congrats on your win :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2019 at 5:39 PM magnificent, Jeanne. I bet this one is a winner (not mine, for sure!!) Jeanne Mcgee July 23, 2019 at 7:13 PM I don't know...I always see you on the podium! Best of luck too...

Janice Canerdy July 22, 2019 at 12:24 PM Lovely--and sizzlin' hot, Jeanne! Janice Jeanne Mcgee July 23, 2019 at 7:12 PM My dreams in the night...lol

Caren Krutsinger July 22, 2019 at 5:40 AM The entire missive is gorgeous, but this appealed to me the most: "ethereal song answers hearts first melody anticipating" Lovely! Jeanne Mcgee July 22, 2019 at 9:32 AM You are a true romantic Caren!

Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2019 at 11:21 AM My favorite part, Jeanne: hungry lips kiss fingertips/petals opening Jeanne Mcgee July 21, 2019 at 12:14 PM like a rose the lips do touch...xoxo

Jan Allison July 21, 2019 at 9:45 AM A beautiful sensual string of haiku, well penned Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx Jeanne Mcgee July 21, 2019 at 9:59 AM Thanks so much Jan.