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Constance La France's 2026-06-02 Breathless Contest...8 Jun 26...' When my being finds its center amidst life's noise, I become breathlessly at peace...' by poet

Breathless

When trellis of flora ripples like a drapery I wander in awe, my yard littered with dusk of starglow ; As quietude circles this view my lulled breaths heave inhale The rhythmic tempo of nightfall, when soft notes of windsong reel : In stillness, treetops hum for mild sways That floral tones invite healing from rigid toil of day's drill--- My breaths less clamped from hours' noise and by sauntering in yard's sanctuary-- My spirit finds wholeness, till evening closes...enshrined
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Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:35 PM
Creative winning work in Constance's Breathless contest. I am delighted it was on the winners' list. Back with ongratulations, Nette. Way to go. Sara K.
Onat Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Congrats for winning this contest; enlightening, serene
Hind Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 10:03 PM
lovely ending <3
La France Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my Breathless contest with your beautifully penned poem, and I loved your quote too~
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:58 AM
Very sweet:)
Jones Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 2:29 PM
I found this to be a soothing and refreshing poem! Good luck in the contest! Also soupmail.
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 1:48 PM
Very beautiful!
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 5:31 AM
What a warm inviting work you have penned in this contest entry which reads like a good contender to me. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. soupmail soon. Sara K.
Greece Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 3:44 AM
I'm going to look at my backyard in a different way. Tremendous poem from you!
Mcconnell Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 3:42 AM
Lovely penning Nette with lovely line of thought and expression.Trust all is well, blessings,Gordon
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