Breathless

The beauty I've found, forever breathless
with her sensual eyes drenched in twilight
she wears beauty as a glowing necklace
persuades my heart with glorious delight
I'm captured by love, from her lover's eyes
beneath the moon-lit sky where we now dance
in this lovers realm that's filled with surprise
with the music of our blooming romance
we'll claim moments as the treasure we've found
deep within hearts of vigorous desire
filled with the soft blooms of passion, spellbound
sighing lovers in a beautiful choir
in her warm form, I'm held breathless this night
from her sensual eyes drenched in twilight

1/28/23
contest writing challenge-B
sponsor Constance La France
word... Breathless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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February 4, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Frederic, beautiful, I love the music, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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February 2, 2023 at 12:57 PM
A beautiful sonnet Fredrick. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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February 1, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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