Breathing


Writing my poetry is like breathing,
the words fall onto the page with a sigh;
they inhale and exhale gasping for life,
and finally breathing and whispering.

Each poem has a trace of me within,
the words murmur of loss, sadness and grief;
their breathing often intense and gripping,
but, sometimes my words are gentle breezes.

My poems are written to inspire you,
to utter a message about this life;
often, they have long pauses of silence,
but, they are breathing-  just listen deeply.

Poetry can be long or short winded,
hints of ardent love, passion, devotion;
my quiet words can fly away like birds,
breathing- we will endure, we will survive.

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March 08, 2023


Poetry/Blank Verse/Non-Metrical/Breathing
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1530-101-08
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Word Chosen #8, breathing

Written for the Standard contest, B - Forms and Words
sponsor, Sotto Poet,, Judged 04/02/2023

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bueckert Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Beautiful words Constance, a well deserved win, congrats!
La France Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Hat, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! An "Amazing" write. You always write from your heart and it shows. Enjoy your win with blessings................
La France Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment !
George Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 8:55 PM
Yes, your poems breathe in life and breathe with life, breathing being the vital sign of life. As you say, they murmur of loss, sadness and grief. Beautifully written. Congratulations Constance on your first place win.
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations !
Poet Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Constance, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is written from the heart.
La France Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, it did come from my heart !
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March 10, 2023 at 8:51 AM
A wonderful Blank verse poem Constance, there’s a musical rhythm flowing through your words. The form seems to have come to you easily, I wonder if that’s true, I’m having trouble getting started and don’t know if I will… Belle
La France Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, writing is like breathing to me so yes, the words for this poem came right from my heart, blessings, Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Hello Constance, yes poetry is all thes things you have mentioned. Lovr & Friendship /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Hello Constance, Poetry is all thes things you mentioned. Yourn welcome.L ove & Friendship /Da\rlene/
La France Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 10:12 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the visit and comment, blessings, Constance
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 5:29 AM
- They are breathing, Constance ... absolutely :) - hugs
La France Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Sunshine, thanks so much for the lovely compliment, blessings and hugs, Constance
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