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Breathing

Writing my poetry is like breathing, the words fall onto the page with a sigh; they inhale and exhale gasping for life, and finally breathing and whispering. Each poem has a trace of me within, the words murmur of loss, sadness and grief; their breathing often intense and gripping, but, sometimes my words are gentle breezes. My poems are written to inspire you, to utter a message about this life; often, they have long pauses of silence, but, they are breathing- just listen deeply. Poetry can be long or short winded, hints of ardent love, passion, devotion; my quiet words can fly away like birds, breathing- we will endure, we will survive. ________________________ March 08, 2023 Poetry/Blank Verse/Non-Metrical/Breathing Copyright Protected, ID 03-1530-101-08 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Word Chosen #8, breathing Written for the Standard contest, B - Forms and Words sponsor, Sotto Poet,, Judged 04/02/2023 First Place

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Date: 4/4/2023 7:47:00 AM
Beautiful words Constance, a well deserved win, congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2023 8:51:00 AM
Hat, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats !
Date: 4/3/2023 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! An "Amazing" write. You always write from your heart and it shows. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2023 8:52:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment !
Date: 4/2/2023 8:55:00 PM
Yes, your poems breathe in life and breathe with life, breathing being the vital sign of life. As you say, they murmur of loss, sadness and grief. Beautifully written. Congratulations Constance on your first place win.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2023 11:02:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations !
Date: 4/2/2023 11:01:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is written from the heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2023 12:50:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, it did come from my heart !
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
A wonderful Blank verse poem Constance, there’s a musical rhythm flowing through your words. The form seems to have come to you easily, I wonder if that’s true, I’m having trouble getting started and don’t know if I will… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2023 5:09:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, writing is like breathing to me so yes, the words for this poem came right from my heart, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/9/2023 3:43:00 PM
Hello Constance, yes poetry is all thes things you have mentioned. Lovr & Friendship /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2023 11:27:00 AM
Hello Constance, Poetry is all thes things you mentioned. Yourn welcome.L ove & Friendship /Da\rlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2023 10:12:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the visit and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/8/2023 5:29:00 AM
- They are breathing, Constance ... absolutely :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2023 10:13:00 PM
Sunshine, thanks so much for the lovely compliment, blessings and hugs, Constance

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