Breathes

Some lives are like a stone quickly skipping over the ponds top, forever tossed.
My life is below the surface trying to reach upward with each breathe lost.
But there is still beauty, deep down here in the great depths below…
For the solitude holds me in its grip as I dwell with what I know.

My occasional trips to the surface leave me vastly wanting more…
Still, my life below the surface doesn’t scare me as it did, once before.
And the breaths will come when given, as my life continues to flow.
True it is dark but beauty lingers, everywhere the currents move below.

At times, the surface reflections seem surreal, as if it’s a place not to go.
Comfort comes more and more to my soul, as the deeper I glide below.
Here I dwell within myself, with words, and thoughts, that carry me along.
Perhaps I have found where I truly belong, as I sing my siren songs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Joshua Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Cool!.....Well done!
Babatunde Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:18 PM
I relate with this. Nice piece.
Quigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Beautifully written. I personally relate to it a lot, too.
Day Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Nicely written - so sad having to accept an unwanted fate. Congrats on your 5th place win in the Your Best contest! Jesse
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Carol, a wonderful win. Congratulations and thank you for the support..Skat
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 7:17 PM
dropping back again with my congrats Carol:-) hugs Jan xx
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:24 PM
This makes me need to catch my breath. Beautifully written it is !! Congratulatons!
A   Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Carol, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading your winner..Sara
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:41 AM
wonderful write Carol so so glad you are back here with us:-):-) :-) and it is great to see all poems sharing the podium:-):-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:55 AM
carol, a wonderful fave poem! :)-luloo
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Carol, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT
A   Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Carol, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Puddifoot Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 3:00 PM
congrats on your winning fave poem, deep indeed, lovely :)
Oyewole Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Your siren songs take you to the winners' list, Carol ... Great piece! Congrats on you win
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:42 PM
A Huge congratulations, its an outstanding real poem, full of wonderful advices. ..very well deserved. Love Terry xoxo
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Your words bring up all sorts of translations. A poem to ponder. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
Ober Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Very interesting ideas and imagery! Congratulations :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 3:07 PM
I think you have a lot of company down their, do you see me? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:30 PM
wonderful write Carol...congrats
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:27 AM
I also love this. A great write indeed. Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Carol. Thanks also for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora
Bauer Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 9:59 AM
beautiful! congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:15 AM
Hi many congrats Carol, love this xx
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Carol. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 6:26 PM
CArol, as I read this one, I realized I believe it is the most profound of all the ones I have been reading on the winners' list. WOW. I love it. a fave.
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