Breathe Me In

He inspires my creativity Serving delicacy at midnight While he holds me so tight Let's me know of my beauty Protects me through the night Taking me to the heavens Showing me such splendor High up with the celestial bodies Shining brighter than all the stars Caressing my contours Flowing with my curatures Taking note of my equations Never deviating from my smooth variations loving the path of my lines Treats me like his goddess Forget the underworld He takes me to every world With just his gentle vibrations With a resonating effect As his warm breath breathes me in
ok A happier note than my last one!;)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Exquisite erotic imagery, Bre. C! Every line drips w/pulse passion: Caressing my contours. Flowing with my curvatures. Taking note of my equations ... Never deviating from my smooth variations. Simply gorgeous ink gaze! Instant fave. Love and more love always.
Chiri Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Lol thank you Freddie! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one and the title!;)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Btw ... GrEaT title! Love and joy always.
Perrin Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Lucky girl! ;-) Beautifully romantic, another Gem :-) x
Chiri Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Lol Elaine your too kind thank you!;)
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:01 PM
205 views! I've just read it and see why... I guess only the brave are left to comment---they must be out of breath!! Seriously, another wonderful write, Brenda. Bravo! Warm wishes, Gershon
Chiri Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Ahh Getshon you do make sure you leave me smiling! Than you so much! And 205 views wow I didn't even see that! Oh well you are one of those brave and not even winded!;) lol thank you!;)
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 3:35 AM
- Your poem shining brighter than all the stars today ... a wonderful poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 4:28 AM
Anne-Lise thank you so much for all your comments!;)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 10:28 PM
So romantic. I have so many lovely thoughts with this one. Beautiful. God bless you, sweet friend
Chiri Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 11:59 PM
Thank you so much Regina you are far too kind my friend!;)
Hamilton Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Yeah yeah romance is served, that's a sensuous poem Brenda
Chiri Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:06 PM
Thank you John! That's very kind of you!;)
Green Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Well he won't need Tic Tacs if he is breathing you in, that's for sure. He probably has the sweetest breath in town. : ) Really nicely done Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Chris appreciate it!;)
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