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Breathe Me In

He inspires my creativity Serving delicacy at midnight While he holds me so tight Let's me know of my beauty Protects me through the night Taking me to the heavens Showing me such splendor High up with the celestial bodies Shining brighter than all the stars Caressing my contours Flowing with my curatures Taking note of my equations Never deviating from my smooth variations loving the path of my lines Treats me like his goddess Forget the underworld He takes me to every world With just his gentle vibrations With a resonating effect As his warm breath breathes me in ok A happier note than my last one!;)

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/16/2019 2:52:00 PM

Exquisite erotic imagery, Bre. C! Every line drips w/pulse passion: Caressing my contours. Flowing with my curvatures. Taking note of my equations ... Never deviating from my smooth variations. Simply gorgeous ink gaze! Instant fave. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/18/2019 7:32:00 AM

Lol thank you Freddie! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one and the title!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/16/2019 2:54:00 PM

Btw ... GrEaT title! Love and joy always.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/10/2019 6:30:00 AM

Lucky girl! ;-) Beautifully romantic, another Gem :-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 12:03:00 PM

Lol Elaine your too kind thank you!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2019 8:01:00 PM

205 views! I've just read it and see why... I guess only the brave are left to comment---they must be out of breath!! Seriously, another wonderful write, Brenda. Bravo! Warm wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/3/2019 9:36:00 PM

Ahh Getshon you do make sure you leave me smiling! Than you so much! And 205 views wow I didn't even see that! Oh well you are one of those brave and not even winded!;) lol thank you!;)