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Breathe Breathe

I breathe in the night air with hair strewn a golden beating heart dances to the tune the gilded page turns as your eyes glow radiant skin trembles from the tender beau Brought by a song pressed against the cleft a waltz to remember inspiring never to regret but for a brief moment a foretaste of fear and woo then again a wayward leaf could not live without you Leaving all the blues of time 'n' space to be free beyond the stars happily I will expire with glee I breathe in the night air with hair strewn respiring a taste of heaven never to soon Written within and without this stone is a lovely jewel I shall make my own potent dreams weave on wind’s swift wreath yes never leave hoping joy will always breathe, yes I breathe...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/27/2016 5:40:00 PM
This did not even place in Mystic Rose's contest :(
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Date: 1/23/2016 8:04:00 PM
extremely beautiful:)
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John Beam
Date: 1/24/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks for kind words.
Date: 1/14/2016 11:36:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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John Beam
Date: 1/14/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Funom for very kind words.
Date: 1/7/2016 4:02:00 PM
This is so brilliant and beautiful my friend , a true master piece....hugs / / :) dalia
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John Beam
Date: 1/8/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thanks, Dalia, I was pleased with it and hope it does well in the contest.
Date: 1/7/2016 7:53:00 AM
nice write John...
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John Beam
Date: 1/7/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, white sage.
Date: 1/7/2016 7:01:00 AM
awesome work
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John Beam
Date: 1/7/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing, LL.

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