Breathe

Breathe for all that you choose to cease
taking gentle steps gliding across the mantles of degrees
created potion mixed in the motion, administered vial of bewitching 
unwithheld acrobatics performed, in the grind of ores desired smelting

A royal scene to which there is pleasure upon measurement 
to be kept locked away, a buried treasure added settlement
released only to follow, a raging bull galloping
entering forces of which forces are handling

Capturing the deeps stare, look in her eyes
keep your Solitude don't you dare reply
sailing across a sea of greed, to n' fro windward
captivating scenes, effectuate depths within molds inward


When night claims you like a wayward leaf of old 
and lays you in her caves, all drenched with gold 
don't ask her any questions and you don't dare stare breathe 
You just follow her as her prisoner, til which she is pleased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/4/2016 3:07:00 AM
ohhh i like this...awesome! :)
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/4/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Sarah!!!
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