Breathe

In, and out… In, and out… Deeper now, exhale… Let all your tensions just trickle out your fingertips like you’ve no desire to hold them as you breathe in, and out… ---------- for the Waltz Wave Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet written on 3/2/23

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/3/2023 6:27:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting! God bless you.

David Mohn

Date: 4/1/2023 4:47:00 PM

Congratulations Jess...simple and elegantly written

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, David!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/1/2023 4:38:00 PM

Congratulations Jeff on this very relaxing poem placing.

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:15:00 PM

Thanks, Daniel - have a great day!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/1/2023 11:41:00 AM

Therapeutic read! Congratulations on your win :)

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:15:00 PM

Thanks very much for your read and comments!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/1/2023 10:50:00 AM

Love the repetition Jeff! Congratulations on your win! :)

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, Linda - been a while - jeff

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2023 10:33:00 AM

Simple and yet very effective, Jeff. A very good example of a Waltz Wave. Congratulations on your high placement ~ Regards // paul

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:14:00 PM

Thanks very much, Paul.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/1/2023 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations Jeff! Your tranquil poem "Breathe", has placed "Third" in my wave contest. I was strict, and yet your poem rose to a podium placing. Well done, my friend, Emile.

Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/2/2023 5:13:00 PM

Oh, thanks so much, Emile! Glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for hosting the contest!