Breath of Poseidon

With spectral grace
A swirling dance
Of liquid light
Plays upon the ancient stage.

What was is not what is 
What could be is untouchable
What dreams bring are illusions
Masking unbearable reality.

At the climax of the play
In a chariot of gold
The creator watches his last scene
And blows out the stage lights.

What is written cannot be undone
What will be lies dormant
The roles are cast
Backdrops hang like lucid ghosts.

Upon a solemn abysmal stage
A god breathes into his characters
An awakening breath and lights
Flood a realm no human will ever see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:57 AM
wow, what a creation this is!! Great allusions here (Hope I am using that word correctly from what I remember of my Literature classes long ago). I just love that final stanza.
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 10:21 AM
When dreams are only dreams..When what We dream of in a tomorrow is untouchable--Aw deep are your verses in your poem and not illusional but so true.
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