Funom Makama Poet Rhyme

Breath of Love

The rays of nature, flowing into the human spirit
landing in its softest spot and sweeping through its lattice
everything then changes with the being becoming a wondrous and happy fool
as romance marries the heart to become one being

In the faculty of love, inexplicable passions are seen
with minty-flavoured affections becoming its dean
all corners of the soul, kept so clean
while the stronghold of selfishness becoming really lean.

Adult mind, stripped by a sense of care quite mean
and to the reaction from the loved, it stays completely keen
emotional susceptibility, becomes its covering like the jean
as the breath of Love, pricks all senses like pin
the effect of its inhale, hindered by nothing
passing through the hollow of feelings no matter how thin
it never feels wrong or else everything good is a sin
so accept this deep breath and let love win



 For the contest: Second Chance #3Contest Info
by Broken Wings
N/A in the contest: Second Chance
Contest deadline: 4/13/2016 12:00:00 AM
Published: 2/10/2015

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Vladislav Raven March 21, 2016 at 2:59 PM Hi Funom, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed your write my friend....Vlad. Funom Makama April 20, 2016 at 1:20 PM Thank you so much Vlad

Beautiful Scars March 20, 2016 at 11:58 AM Funom, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Funom Makama April 20, 2016 at 1:20 PM Thank you so much Laura Loo

Kate Mcnaughton April 1, 2015 at 1:44 AM "As romance marries the heart to become one being" What a beautiful write, thank you also for your recent comments on my write about my man, we are lucky to have a love that has lasted all these years. Hard to believe I wrote it in 2009. I look forward to reading more of your inspiring poetry. Kate. Funom Makama April 1, 2015 at 8:29 AM thank you so much Kate for your insightful, encouraging and beautiful comment...

Seren Roberts February 17, 2015 at 10:33 PM Lovely words written with feeling, ....Seren Funom Makama February 20, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thank you so much Seren... I really appreciate it!

Jan Allison February 10, 2015 at 8:37 AM absolutely beautiful funom - good luck in the contest hugs Jan xx 7 xx Jan Allison February 20, 2015 at 12:45 PM LOL Funom - Your gender is in no doubt from the new avatar:-) I hide behind my dragonfly - from day one I have wanted to be judged on my poems and not how people perceive i look:-) hugs Jan xx Funom Makama February 20, 2015 at 12:25 PM Thank you so much Jan... As it seems the previous isn't too conspicuous and almost everyone thinks I am female.... Which has been an interesting situation for me Jan Allison February 11, 2015 at 12:28 PM Love the new avatar:-) Hugs jan xx Funom Makama February 11, 2015 at 9:20 AM Thank you very much Jan.... I really appreciate it

Janet Eaton February 10, 2015 at 6:58 AM Such a beautiful poem describing the breath of love. Waking up my senses with your descriptions:) Great to read your word. Good Luck and bless you. Funom Makama February 11, 2015 at 9:07 AM Thank you so much Janet.. I really appreciate the tender and soft comment

Eileen Manassian February 10, 2015 at 5:54 AM Loved those culminating lines started from..."It never feels wrong" Wow! Great way to end this piece, Funom. Oh...I also enjoyed minty flavored affections! How delicious. So many things you've conjured up in the mind with this take on the theme. I wish you every success. Thanks for your lovely visits of late. Hugs Funom Makama February 10, 2015 at 6:43 AM Oh my dear Eileen... Asides the speed your comment used in reaching this piece, your words are so wonderful and glorifying. Thank you so much for your visit and like on my poem.. I hope your wish materializes.