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Breath of Love

The rays of nature, flowing into the human spirit landing in its softest spot and sweeping through its lattice everything then changes with the being becoming a wondrous and happy fool as romance marries the heart to become one being In the faculty of love, inexplicable passions are seen with minty-flavoured affections becoming its dean all corners of the soul, kept so clean while the stronghold of selfishness becoming really lean. Adult mind, stripped by a sense of care quite mean and to the reaction from the loved, it stays completely keen emotional susceptibility, becomes its covering like the jean as the breath of Love, pricks all senses like pin the effect of its inhale, hindered by nothing passing through the hollow of feelings no matter how thin it never feels wrong or else everything good is a sin so accept this deep breath and let love win For the contest: Second Chance #3Contest Info by Broken Wings N/A in the contest: Second Chance Contest deadline: 4/13/2016 12:00:00 AM Published: 2/10/2015

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/21/2016 2:59:00 PM

Hi Funom, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed your write my friend....Vlad.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Vlad

Lu Loo

Date: 3/20/2016 11:58:00 AM

Funom, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Laura Loo

Kate Mcnaughton

Date: 4/1/2015 1:44:00 AM

"As romance marries the heart to become one being" What a beautiful write, thank you also for your recent comments on my write about my man, we are lucky to have a love that has lasted all these years. Hard to believe I wrote it in 2009. I look forward to reading more of your inspiring poetry. Kate.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2015 8:29:00 AM

thank you so much Kate for your insightful, encouraging and beautiful comment...

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/17/2015 10:33:00 PM

Lovely words written with feeling, ....Seren

Funom Makama
Date: 2/20/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Seren... I really appreciate it!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2015 8:37:00 AM

absolutely beautiful funom - good luck in the contest hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 12:45:00 PM

LOL Funom - Your gender is in no doubt from the new avatar:-) I hide behind my dragonfly - from day one I have wanted to be judged on my poems and not how people perceive i look:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama
Date: 2/20/2015 12:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan... As it seems the previous isn't too conspicuous and almost everyone thinks I am female.... Which has been an interesting situation for me

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 12:28:00 PM

Love the new avatar:-) Hugs jan xx

Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Jan.... I really appreciate it

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/10/2015 6:58:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem describing the breath of love. Waking up my senses with your descriptions:) Great to read your word. Good Luck and bless you.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2015 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Janet.. I really appreciate the tender and soft comment

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/10/2015 5:54:00 AM

Loved those culminating lines started from..."It never feels wrong" Wow! Great way to end this piece, Funom. Oh...I also enjoyed minty flavored affections! How delicious. So many things you've conjured up in the mind with this take on the theme. I wish you every success. Thanks for your lovely visits of late. Hugs

Funom Makama
Date: 2/10/2015 6:43:00 AM

Oh my dear Eileen... Asides the speed your comment used in reaching this piece, your words are so wonderful and glorifying. Thank you so much for your visit and like on my poem.. I hope your wish materializes.