Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Breath of Love

Within each heave grows mild a tender sight
That follows your beat through the hem of night
Where I become a whisper of moon’s delight
To cuddle each sigh and bestow warm rest...
From pricked hours, from low days that arrest
A  loss of serenity far from grace
My breath of love wraps you in sweet embrace.

Cracks of the heart are like youth’s brittle wear
Rupturing hope as eyes weep, oh daughter
The betrayal of friends, in shadows, tear 
And wrenching the edged grasses as you pass by
Down lonely road seemingly far yet nearby...
Bring then my note's whiff, one step at a time
To hum afresh life's interludes sublime.


Gail Doyle's Breath Of Love
2/08/2015

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 12, 2015 at 11:35 PM Galing galing Nette.. :)! Wow! Cobgratz on being the piem of the day.. :)!!!

Lee Ramage February 11, 2015 at 9:22 PM Nette, nice to see you are still writing such beautiful poetry. Congratulations on your poem. Sincerely Lee

Kp Nunez February 11, 2015 at 8:57 PM Speaks breathtakingly of a mother's nurturing love, a constant source comfort and solace. Beautiful and sweet, Nette. A 7 and a fav! Congrats on POTD. Smiles from your kabayan in the thousand isles...Kim :)

James Peranteau February 10, 2015 at 10:35 PM Well Nette, dear poet....your fans have spoken ! In truth, I did not read everyones comments in regard this write, yet, I am certain for sure that, with sooo many comments, every angle was enveloped ! I read your touching write, and how pleased I was to know that I am not the only soul here on the Soup who with confidence; can speak in a lull, fortifying lifes journey without causing the childs surplus of burden. I love your gentle touch Nette......Have a blessed weekend....much love, james

Tim Smith February 10, 2015 at 5:30 PM A beautiful piece nette...congratulations .... huggs

Jan Allison February 10, 2015 at 12:13 PM many congrats on POD - a delight to read this beauty again:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper February 10, 2015 at 12:10 PM Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Nette, Beautiful write the love of a protective mom. Blessings Eve

Harry Horsman February 10, 2015 at 11:39 AM sheer beauty,,is this nette,, truly you...

Aiyah Torres February 10, 2015 at 11:23 AM congrats dear... this is absolutely breathtaking !!! .. :))

David Meade February 10, 2015 at 8:35 AM Congrats again dear friend. A rock solid love bond.

Monterey Sirak February 10, 2015 at 8:13 AM You write so eloquently of the exquisite love between a mother and daughter.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair February 10, 2015 at 7:49 AM There is no dearth of poems on love. But this one is one of a kind, as only you can compose, delightful and alluring, Nette!!

Eileen Manassian February 10, 2015 at 6:01 AM Congrats on being POTD with this write about the love of a mother for her daughter, Nette. That love is eternal.

Janet Eaton February 10, 2015 at 5:58 AM Congratulations Nette on poem of the day. What a great way to start this day reading your beautiful words. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Janet

Shane Cooper February 9, 2015 at 11:33 PM Such beautiful imagry to descibe a mothers love for her daughter. and when lifes trials become to great to provide love still and surcease of soul as her daughter returns. So much encapsulated in so few wonderful brush strokes, a true work of art. Thank you for sharing. love Shane xxx

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2015 at 7:01 PM the word sublime at the end of this one truly mirrors the definition for your poem. Utterly sublime!!

Cherl Dunn February 9, 2015 at 12:58 PM Dear Nette, I'm in awe of this emotional write, I had to read it twice, love your loving feeling that you've infused within these devotional lines of yours, the emergence of imagery and detail is completely obsobing, you drew me in and shared so much of yourself with me the reader, simply brilliant work here, I'm thrilled with the read today, and I'm glad I stopped by to read your recent work cheri

David Meade February 8, 2015 at 9:51 PM Watching the one you give birth to -- their first breath . . . first hurt, first love . . . you captured the essence of a mother's love. 7

Robert Lindley February 8, 2015 at 9:04 PM A super 7 for this jewel my friend. As always you strike gold with your inspired words and clear message in your art!!!

Janet Eaton February 8, 2015 at 7:30 PM Loved this so much. Great read. Good luck

Arthur Vaso February 8, 2015 at 7:04 PM Your words here make mine minor and pointless, this is magically romantic! Loved it

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2015 at 6:47 PM This is a stunning entry for the contest Nette. Perfect rhyme too! I think she will love it.

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 6:19 PM such a wonderful flow to your rhyme Nette - wonderful imagery as ever - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet February 8, 2015 at 5:56 PM Your words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. #7