Sam Kauffman Poet Sonnet

Breath of God

Breathe On Me God

"Breathe" on me with your sweet breath O Lord
Light inspiration's "gasp" with breathy embers
Sweep out my forlorn "whisper" of melancholy
"Utter" the familiar freshness I remember.

In soft whirlwind "murmur" stir my heart
Refresh my stale swirling breath
Resuscitate my starving breath
No asthmatic wheeze of strangled death.

Let me inhale your animation
My words exhale the "sigh" of life's prophecy
Your murmuring winds clear my blocked airways
To soar on wings of breathing majesty.

Open my passages of sighing palpitation
My soul alive in eternal respiration

5-3-21
Contest: Breathe
Sponsor: Constance La France
Required Words: breathe, gasp, murmur, sigh, whisper, utter

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Constance La France May 11, 2021 at 5:05 PM SAM, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, well done, love _Constance

Beryl Edmonds May 10, 2021 at 6:16 PM A wonderful sonnet Sam, we all need the breath of God to keep our souls alive and for peace of mind. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

Panagiota Romios May 5, 2021 at 2:09 PM Best wishes Sam. Powerful verses... Pangie xx Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 10:10 AM Thank you so much Pangie! For me the breath of God is a powerful, life changing wind. All the best my friend. Sending you blessings of fresh air and clear skies.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 3, 2021 at 10:46 PM Inspiring and uplifting poem. A poetic breath that we ought to inhale and that deserves to be noticed, my dearest friend, Sam! Good luck. God bless you! Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 10:09 AM Thank you dear friend! Your gracious words are a breath of fresh air! So many people struggle for breath looking to find oxygen in airless atmospheres. God always allows us to breath deeply! We are blessed! Stay well. Sending you blessings and gratitude. I always look forward to your thoughtful messages.

Unseeking Seeker May 3, 2021 at 7:58 PM Great take on the contest, Sam! All the best and thanks for your visit to my page Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 10:02 AM Thank you Seeker! Thank you for your feedback and lovely message of good wishes. Have been enjoying your writing! Blessings of peace to you!

JC Brul May 3, 2021 at 3:36 PM This is brilliant dear Sam! Your deep faith is very much seen in this sonnet. It flows like music caressing my soul! A fave for me.. Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 10:00 AM Hi JCB! I am truly honored by your fav. What a beautiful message. Thank you. For me God's breath is flowing music of grace. Blessings dear friend.

Regina Mcintosh May 3, 2021 at 12:40 PM Wonderful entry. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win, Sweet friend. Love, Gina Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 9:56 AM Hello dear friend! Thank you. God truly is large and in charge. In God's breath all of us can truly breathe! Blessings to you. Much love.

Sotto Poet May 3, 2021 at 11:45 AM There is no one better than God to help and assist you during times of adversity. Great poem Sam, I enjoy reading it, wish you the best of luck in the contest. Sam Kauffman May 10, 2021 at 9:53 AM You are so right my friend! So many struggle. I know I have to remind myself that humility is knowing my need for God. So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for your good wishes! All the best! Blessings!