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Breath of God

Breathe On Me God "Breathe" on me with your sweet breath O Lord Light inspiration's "gasp" with breathy embers Sweep out my forlorn "whisper" of melancholy "Utter" the familiar freshness I remember. In soft whirlwind "murmur" stir my heart Refresh my stale swirling breath Resuscitate my starving breath No asthmatic wheeze of strangled death. Let me inhale your animation My words exhale the "sigh" of life's prophecy Your murmuring winds clear my blocked airways To soar on wings of breathing majesty. Open my passages of sighing palpitation My soul alive in eternal respiration 5-3-21 Contest: Breathe Sponsor: Constance La France Required Words: breathe, gasp, murmur, sigh, whisper, utter

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Constance La France

Date: 5/11/2021 5:05:00 PM

SAM, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, well done, love _Constance

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/10/2021 6:16:00 PM

A wonderful sonnet Sam, we all need the breath of God to keep our souls alive and for peace of mind. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/5/2021 2:09:00 PM

Best wishes Sam. Powerful verses... Pangie xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Pangie! For me the breath of God is a powerful, life changing wind. All the best my friend. Sending you blessings of fresh air and clear skies.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/3/2021 10:46:00 PM

Inspiring and uplifting poem. A poetic breath that we ought to inhale and that deserves to be noticed, my dearest friend, Sam! Good luck. God bless you!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 10:09:00 AM

Thank you dear friend! Your gracious words are a breath of fresh air! So many people struggle for breath looking to find oxygen in airless atmospheres. God always allows us to breath deeply! We are blessed! Stay well. Sending you blessings and gratitude. I always look forward to your thoughtful messages.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/3/2021 7:58:00 PM

Great take on the contest, Sam! All the best and thanks for your visit to my page

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Seeker! Thank you for your feedback and lovely message of good wishes. Have been enjoying your writing! Blessings of peace to you!

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/3/2021 3:36:00 PM

This is brilliant dear Sam! Your deep faith is very much seen in this sonnet. It flows like music caressing my soul! A fave for me..

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 10:00:00 AM

Hi JCB! I am truly honored by your fav. What a beautiful message. Thank you. For me God's breath is flowing music of grace. Blessings dear friend.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/3/2021 12:40:00 PM

Wonderful entry. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win, Sweet friend. Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 9:56:00 AM

Hello dear friend! Thank you. God truly is large and in charge. In God's breath all of us can truly breathe! Blessings to you. Much love.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2021 11:45:00 AM

There is no one better than God to help and assist you during times of adversity. Great poem Sam, I enjoy reading it, wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/10/2021 9:53:00 AM

You are so right my friend! So many struggle. I know I have to remind myself that humility is knowing my need for God. So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for your good wishes! All the best! Blessings!