Breath of Autumn

You can feel the breath of fall
as she blows cold air across the plain
she whispers to the sun
asking it to shine a few more weeks
while she gathers the bountiful yield
bringing closure to the seasons warmth
night temperatures begin to plummet 
her breathing becomes raspy
as  coldness encases
her labored breathing ceases
with a final breath she
brings forth winters frost.


08/01/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:10 PM
another one for personification. love this one too, dear.
Makama Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
Babcock Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thank you for your comment. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Hello Phyllis... a nicely written prelude to winter's chill. While we swelter you seek shelter at this time of the year - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thanks my friend. Yes we are in the middle of winter and into a cold spell at the moment. love phyl
La France Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Phyllis, so beautifully penned, I love this 7
Babcock Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Thanks Constance. Nice and cold at the moment here on the prairies. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:27 PM
- That's me !!!! : "Asking it two shine a few more weeks" :) - Winter is too cold - A wistful and wonderful poems, dear Phyllis (7) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Still down with this flu so back to the doc tomorrow. 5 weeks and is getting me down so looking to get rid of winter.
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:26 PM
I adore autumn ... wonderful personification Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx7
Babcock Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:46 PM
type this again as it seemed to get lost somewhere so if you get it twice you will know why. Thanks for your comment. love phyl
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