Breath Gold

" BREATH GOLD " There were the crests , There were the troughs , With every breathe that grows . Your matter as attire , Concatenate the souls on fire . For now and forever . To just breath gold , And let hold .
S•R• @thatoneshe_
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:33 AM
I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7
Rawat Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 11:04 PM
OMG!! thanks it really means a lot. :)
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May 13, 2016 at 12:55 AM
a pleasing write... that oNEsHE........ LINDA
Rawat Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Thanks : )
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