Breakthrough

Dark clouds loom beyond battered mountains,
cracking sounds seep through broken walls
and murmuring voices echo near and far.
We did not know where to begin,
but I had  a strong feeling that we would win.
We leaped through block doors, 
trampling on broken glasses,
tearing down make shift barricades,
busting wires  fences,
bulldozing fortified doors,
and chiseling sealed up walls.
Our stricken faces dented with anguish, 
broken voices crackle with fear,
spilling unbridled emotions in the atmosphere.
Smoldering petrol engulfed the air
charring corruption,
cleansing hearts,
purifying souls,
while tears of joy flow without control.
We journey through dark tunnels,
broken bridges and rocky mountains,
cutting and clearing the bushy path,
until we finally made the mark.
One chance, one dip 
we broke the glass ceiling with a mystical pick.

 ©2013 Christine Phillips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Babcock Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 9:22 PM
A wonderful poem you have penned. Thank you for your comment. love phyl
Anish Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:50 PM
This poems moves rapidly and was exciting to read. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Ainsley Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 5:47 AM
The glass ceiling and then some! It read like a combat mission and it was and it is. I will show this wonderful poem to my grand daughter . Thank You Christine,
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 1:07 PM
vivid and full of power-packed lines... i like!..;) huggs
Ehlinger Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Wow! Whooh! Whoah! Don't you know!
Horsman Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 3:20 PM
truly wonderful poetry Christine,, an absolute joy to read, a poem which holds the reader to the very last word...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 9:34 AM
I am a fan of free verse and this is a particularly good piece. I like the ending it adds so much more meaning and layers to the poem.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 4:34 AM
My goodness, what determination! How not to be a winner after all this! Superb message to keep on going till victory comes! Excellent! PS: I heard you and tried! Thank you!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace