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Breaking Up

apart again crestfallen within my longing persists- we dis-engage into parallel lives

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/30/2010 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on you HM win in the contest, Brian! I particularly like the last line.."..into parallel lives" Enjoy your success....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/29/2010 9:47:00 PM
Nicely done and congrats for the HM. LUv andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:42:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write... enjoy your special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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