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Breaking Daylight / Tagesanbruch

When daylight breaks With forlorn voices of nature In fading darkness Tired stars faint and disappear First sunrays glooming through clouds ---------------------------------------------- Wenn Tag anbricht Mit einsamen Stimmen der Natur In schwindendem Dunkel Müde Sterne verblassen, verschwinden Sonnenstrahlen leuchten durch Wolken

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Sharon Winter

Date: 6/4/2010 8:39:00 AM

Fabulous imagery - wonderful write! A good weekend to you my friend. love, shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 7:57:00 PM

well done Gert.how do they say last call for alcohol,,j.k.. In other words this is my last comment of the day. Glad it was this one. Have your self a good one,..p.d.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/13/2010 4:29:00 PM

Awesome Tanka and great imagery again, Gert. And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Indeed I am very proud of my daughter. It was a great Mother's Day for me. Best wishes, Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2010 12:22:00 PM

Reads like a cloudy morn with a depressive mood..Hope just a mood that you were trying to portray and not your mood...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write "Under Rose Trellis".....I went out to see the roses again this morn and absorb the fragrance and that Choka came to my mind...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 8:50:00 AM

Oh my ..tired stars faint.. what beautiful word Gert and I could see them doing that .. such a lovely expressive Tanka ..a form I have not tried... will think about the Italian write but my spelling would kill it I think..haha.. my Grandma would come back and haunt me..haha..luv.. Linda-Marie..