Breaking a Confidence

Christy did not know how she was going to fix the problem.
Her sister Carol, had confided in her.
Christy knew she could not let Carol return out of state with her abusive husband.
The abuser was glaring at her when Christy came into the living room.
“Where is Carol?” he demanded. He was impatient to get going.

On automatic pilot, Christy said “DAD!”
Her father was lying on the floor watching TV
DAD!
He looked at her this time.
“Steve has been beating Carol.”

Without a word the sisters’ father got up off the floor.
Walked to Steve, spun him, and walked him out the door.
He had a hold of his neck.
He put his other hand on his waistband and plunked him over the porch railing.
It was about a fourteen foot drop.
Without another word Dad returned to his place on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Both funny and sad. But mostly funny!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 11:34 PM
Less funny when you think your sister will never speak to you again
Hawkins Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 5:51 PM
Good for your Dad, Abusers are bullies and cowards at heart. There should be more people like your Dad who refuse to tolerate such despicable behaviour, Bravo!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 11:35 PM
Thank you Shirley
Bauer Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 2:24 PM
i love how you tell a story, caren! good for dad!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 11:35 PM
My dad did not waste words or time
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:08 AM
I don't think dealing with spousal abuse is breaking a confidence, under any circumstance. The information comes as a cry for help. So...help! I hope the bastard's neck was broken!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 1:53 PM
It was not. I was there, watching my father sail him over the railing.
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