Breakfastball

I tried dunking a basketball but it wouldn’t fit in my coffee cup

12/9/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 14, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your wonderful one line win. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 8:00 PM
wow, I am starting the list now and seeing you got FIRST place. Awesome!
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 7:46 PM
oh this is so cute. I guess I have not seen the sports winners yet. I should go visit them all. Congrats.
Johnson Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Nice work David. Congrats. Curtis
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Wonderful write, David, congratulations on your win!!
Wigley Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Thanks for the smile, David, well done. Regards, Viv
A. Sharma Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Wow how lovely David..so a basket lover.. congrats on top podium!!
Smith Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 4:34 PM
lol...excellent David...congrats on the win
Negron Flores Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations David.
Lane Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Well done, David. Congratulations
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:03 PM
ha ha great one - congrats David:-) hugs jan xx
Milliner Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Nice one, David! Congrats!!
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 6:52 AM
- David, a great line to contest: One liners 4! - Congrats and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 10, 2015 at 6:09 AM
David, this was so funny. Congratulations on your top win it was well deserved:-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Lol. A hilarious line it is! Congrats for your #1 placement in the One Liners 4 contest! ;-)
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