Breakfast In a Brooklyn Diner

The TV shows
wars and scandal
with big faces 
moving lips
running words
on every wall
while disc jockeys threaten 
bad traffic and weather
through the ceiling.
I slurp my omelet’s florescent cheese 
that strings from mouth to plate,
slug my coffee
and try to catch the waiter’s fast glance
before the street cleaner comes
loaded guns
spinning down the block.
I hear a buzz from my purse.
Someone I’ve never met
wants to know, “What’s up?”

My soul’s reply: “WTF?”

April 18, 2017
for Landscape and Towns Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Oh wow, I love how you did this one. You really captured the layered ambiance of this place. One city I have not yet been to. Maybe one day!! Congrats on an awesome win.
Carmack Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Congrats Rita.
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Congratulation on your win ~*
Simmonds Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Cozart Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Very clever. Congrats on your win. Better late than never.
Simmonds Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Dale!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace