BREAK UP

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11/18/23

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Contest by Joseph May

BREAK UP She lived happily in Fool’s Paradise. Hit of thunder bolt from clear cloudless sky, knocked her down on shock to paralyse marital life standing on bricks of ‘LIE’. Wheel of TRUTH rotating automatic exposed spouse with deceit and betrayal She faced firm fact to deal, act pragmatic, sudden happenstance : Disgraceful, dismal. Emptiness embowered : Life seemed useless, shattered completely on first severe stroke, yet she neither cried nor felt helpless, but discarded him and relation broke. She turned cold but bold to live on her own. Fool’s Gold when detected fake,was thrown.

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