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Break the Cycle

Sacrificing identity for a love plagued by mediocrity trumps a lifetime of loneliness, for in the end you may be unhappy and detached from yourself, but at least you will find comfort in knowing that you will not be eternally sequestered from the human interaction that can somewhat mimic the love that fills the gaps of a lonely heart. What do you think? Would you trade in your identity for a life of mediocre love if it meant you could escape indefinite solitary misery? ......Or are they really just one-in-the-same; yet another cycle we must break?

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Date: 12/8/2010 5:07:00 AM
Since u ask in your poem Katie .. NO I never would trade in my identity for LUV or anything else.. a superb write with intensity and wisdom in the final analysis.. enjoyed such treasured lines today with luv..
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Date: 12/8/2010 4:27:00 AM
Sometimes women do just that if they think they can't make it alone..That sets them up for that breaking of that relationship later in life..I was delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:25:00 AM
Nice poetry my friend... well written piece...
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