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Break Maiden

He neatly won the race hands down. It was the gelding's break maiden. He secured the coveted crown. He neatly won the race hands down. Triumphant smile, no frown. No frown! Both horse and jockey wreath-laden! He neatly won the race hands down. It was the gelding's break maiden.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2022 9:41:00 PM

I love horses and this is a fine triolet Linda. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/26/2022 5:39:00 AM

Nice to see you here Connie. I appreciate the congrats and supportive words. Linda

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/25/2022 9:11:00 PM

Linda, Congratulations for a win on a very nice Triolet. Cool topic, too.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/26/2022 5:38:00 AM

Hi Carol. Thanks for the visit and kind congrats. Linda

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2022 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a fun/blessed day writing away......

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 12:25:00 PM

Hey sweet Paula. Thanks for visiting and for the congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Linda

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/25/2022 7:01:00 AM

Wow! Where the champagne? Congrats on your win, Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 7:10:00 AM

Many thanks for the visit my friend. Wait while I get the flutes ;) Linda

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2022 12:58:00 AM

Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 6:09:00 AM

Many thanks for the placement Joseph. An interesting and fun contest! Linda

Constance La France

Date: 8/24/2022 2:08:00 PM

Linda, well done Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Constance. Linda

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/23/2022 12:25:00 PM

Linda! Greatly written, wow! My fingers crossed for a big win. Have a wonderful summer’s day. Panagiota xxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2022 2:01:00 PM

Linda, you kill me-))) You are a delight, plus! Panagiota xxx

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 1:23:00 PM

Hi Pangie my friend. Many thanks for your read and for your crossed fingers (don't hurt yourself - teehee). Linda

Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 8:25:00 AM

Great entry and a fine Triolet, Linda. Good luck! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 9:55:00 AM

You are too kind my friend. Thanks for the visit! Linda Alice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2022 5:51:00 PM

Much nicer than being an 'Iron Maiden,' ala Margaret Thatcher. lol. 'Course, she had a lot of horse sense. :) gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2022 8:10:00 AM

With all her faults, I liked the gal! LOL Thanks for the visit gw. :) laf

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/20/2022 2:29:00 PM

Smoothly written. Great one. Well done :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/20/2022 5:17:00 PM

Many thanks Heidi. I appreciate the visit and nice comment :) Linda

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2022 10:16:00 AM

with a winning horse and a great Jockey how can you go wrong, a very skillful poem well done dear Linda, winning wishes xo

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/20/2022 10:24:00 AM

Many thanks Vie my friend. hugs, Linda

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 8/19/2022 4:10:00 PM

I love the triumphant smile! Elizabeth

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/19/2022 4:37:00 PM

Hello Elizabeth. Thank you for your visit and nice comment. :) Linda