Linda Alice Fowler Poet Triolet

Break Maiden

He neatly won the race hands down.
It was the gelding's break maiden.
He secured the coveted crown.
He neatly won the race hands down.
Triumphant smile, no frown. No frown!
Both horse and jockey wreath-laden!
He neatly won the race hands down.
It was the gelding's break maiden.

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Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2022 at 9:41 PM I love horses and this is a fine triolet Linda. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo Linda Alice Fowler August 26, 2022 at 5:39 AM Nice to see you here Connie. I appreciate the congrats and supportive words. Linda

Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2022 at 12:08 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a fun/blessed day writing away...... Linda Alice Fowler August 25, 2022 at 12:25 PM Hey sweet Paula. Thanks for visiting and for the congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Linda

Unseeking Seeker August 25, 2022 at 7:01 AM Wow! Where the champagne? Congrats on your win, Linda Linda Alice Fowler August 25, 2022 at 7:10 AM Many thanks for the visit my friend. Wait while I get the flutes ;) Linda

Joseph May August 25, 2022 at 12:58 AM Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win Linda Alice Fowler August 25, 2022 at 6:09 AM Many thanks for the placement Joseph. An interesting and fun contest! Linda

Constance La France August 24, 2022 at 2:08 PM Linda, well done Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ Linda Alice Fowler August 25, 2022 at 6:07 AM Thank you Constance. Linda

Panagiota Romios August 23, 2022 at 12:25 PM Linda! Greatly written, wow! My fingers crossed for a big win. Have a wonderful summer’s day. Panagiota xxx Panagiota Romios August 23, 2022 at 2:01 PM Linda, you kill me-))) You are a delight, plus! Panagiota xxx Linda Alice Fowler August 23, 2022 at 1:23 PM Hi Pangie my friend. Many thanks for your read and for your crossed fingers (don't hurt yourself - teehee). Linda

Bill Baker August 23, 2022 at 8:25 AM Great entry and a fine Triolet, Linda. Good luck! Bill Linda Alice Fowler August 23, 2022 at 9:55 AM You are too kind my friend. Thanks for the visit! Linda Alice

Gershon Wolf August 21, 2022 at 5:51 PM Much nicer than being an 'Iron Maiden,' ala Margaret Thatcher. lol. 'Course, she had a lot of horse sense. :) gw Linda Alice Fowler August 22, 2022 at 8:10 AM With all her faults, I liked the gal! LOL Thanks for the visit gw. :) laf

Heidi Sands August 20, 2022 at 2:29 PM Smoothly written. Great one. Well done :) Linda Alice Fowler August 20, 2022 at 5:17 PM Many thanks Heidi. I appreciate the visit and nice comment :) Linda

Mystic Rose Rose August 20, 2022 at 10:16 AM with a winning horse and a great Jockey how can you go wrong, a very skillful poem well done dear Linda, winning wishes xo Linda Alice Fowler August 20, 2022 at 10:24 AM Many thanks Vie my friend. hugs, Linda

Elizabeth Mccann August 19, 2022 at 4:10 PM I love the triumphant smile! Elizabeth Linda Alice Fowler August 19, 2022 at 4:37 PM Hello Elizabeth. Thank you for your visit and nice comment. :) Linda