Break Maiden

He neatly won the race hands down.
It was the gelding's break maiden.
He secured the coveted crown.
He neatly won the race hands down.
Triumphant smile, no frown. No frown!
Both horse and jockey wreath-laden!
He neatly won the race hands down.
It was the gelding's break maiden.

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Date: 8/25/2022 9:41:00 PM
I love horses and this is a fine triolet Linda. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/26/2022 5:39:00 AM
Nice to see you here Connie. I appreciate the congrats and supportive words. Linda
Date: 8/25/2022 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a fun/blessed day writing away......
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 12:25:00 PM
Hey sweet Paula. Thanks for visiting and for the congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Linda
Date: 8/25/2022 7:01:00 AM
Wow! Where the champagne? Congrats on your win, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 7:10:00 AM
Many thanks for the visit my friend. Wait while I get the flutes ;) Linda
Date: 8/25/2022 12:58:00 AM
Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 6:09:00 AM
Many thanks for the placement Joseph. An interesting and fun contest! Linda
Date: 8/24/2022 2:08:00 PM
Linda, well done Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2022 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Constance. Linda
Date: 8/23/2022 12:25:00 PM
Linda! Greatly written, wow! My fingers crossed for a big win. Have a wonderful summer’s day. Panagiota xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2022 2:01:00 PM
Linda, you kill me-))) You are a delight, plus! Panagiota xxx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 1:23:00 PM
Hi Pangie my friend. Many thanks for your read and for your crossed fingers (don't hurt yourself - teehee). Linda
Date: 8/23/2022 8:25:00 AM
Great entry and a fine Triolet, Linda. Good luck! Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 9:55:00 AM
You are too kind my friend. Thanks for the visit! Linda Alice
Date: 8/21/2022 5:51:00 PM
Much nicer than being an 'Iron Maiden,' ala Margaret Thatcher. lol. 'Course, she had a lot of horse sense. :) gw
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2022 8:10:00 AM
With all her faults, I liked the gal! LOL Thanks for the visit gw. :) laf
Date: 8/20/2022 2:29:00 PM
Smoothly written. Great one. Well done :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/20/2022 5:17:00 PM
Many thanks Heidi. I appreciate the visit and nice comment :) Linda
Date: 8/20/2022 10:16:00 AM
with a winning horse and a great Jockey how can you go wrong, a very skillful poem well done dear Linda, winning wishes xo
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/20/2022 10:24:00 AM
Many thanks Vie my friend. hugs, Linda
Date: 8/19/2022 4:10:00 PM
I love the triumphant smile! Elizabeth
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/19/2022 4:37:00 PM
Hello Elizabeth. Thank you for your visit and nice comment. :) Linda
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