Bread Oil Wine a Tristich
BREAD OIL WINE -a TRISTICH
The Lord makes glad the heart with wine
Oil to make the face shine-
His Bread alone sustains the soul,and make us whole.
Inspired by and adapted from the tristich in Psalm 104:15
TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation
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Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2015
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