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Bread Haiku

just five barley loaves
two small fish
fed the five thousand

Written 4th October 2018.

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Date: 10/12/2018 12:07:00 PM
That is true...so true. What an amazing miracle. Good luck on the contest. :) Thanks for your visit to my blog.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/12/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, you're welcome. Tom
Date: 10/10/2018 12:02:00 PM
Wow, great take on the contest theme, Tom. Very original and certainly a meaningful poem on this miracle from the Bible. (I'd give it high marks for creativity and substance!) Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you very much much Carolyn, pleased you liked it. Tom.
Date: 10/8/2018 10:38:00 PM
Good one, Tom. Great take on the challenge.
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Date: 10/9/2018 3:12:00 AM
Thank you Line , have seen some good ones for the contest. Tom.
Date: 10/8/2018 1:38:00 PM
Oh such a beautiful and meaningful haiku, Tom. Best wishes for a win with your stirring poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/8/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan, I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 10/8/2018 11:41:00 AM
Excellent, my friend. Here is to a win for this great entry in the contest, Tom! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/8/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon. Tom.
Date: 10/7/2018 5:13:00 AM
This is really a good one for the contest. I pray you win my friend. Exceptionally good.
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Date: 10/7/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you C.P. ,I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 10/6/2018 10:03:00 AM
GREAT response to the prompt, Tom! Janice
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Date: 10/6/2018 10:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice. Tom.
Date: 10/5/2018 5:18:00 PM
A good choice of subject, Tom. Do you think there will be enough to feed all Soupers! I'll make do with the leftovers:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/5/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul , I'm assured there will be plenty, with seconds if you wish, bring your own butter. Tom.
Date: 10/5/2018 2:19:00 PM
Hi Tom, Good poem for contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2018 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, hope you're well. Tom
Date: 10/4/2018 3:24:00 PM
awesome take on the theme. I am sure she will be pleased!
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Date: 10/4/2018 11:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, a contest sure fires up your muse. Tom.
Date: 10/4/2018 2:21:00 PM
not even mathematics could explain this... what a rousing piece, tom.. can i have pita?.. huggs
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Date: 10/4/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Nette, of course might be a bit hard by the time you get it lol. Tom
Date: 10/4/2018 1:08:00 PM
and that is all he need to feed thousands :) Well done Tom
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
Date: 10/4/2018 12:29:00 PM
A great idea and use of the allotted word count, Tom. I'm hoping I'll also rise to the occasion!! All the best Wendy
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Wendy, I have no doubt you will rise to the occasion.I do enjoy the challenge of this form. I'm in Turkey at the moment so enjoying some decent weather. Hope all's well. Tom
Date: 10/4/2018 11:59:00 AM
A great recounting of Jesus' miracle in haiku form, Tom. Very well done! I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thanks very much Carol. Tom.
Date: 10/4/2018 9:16:00 AM
Please sir can I have some more? Sorry, went all Oliver on you there.... Clever ku...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2018 10:51:00 AM
Now I have that image of poor Oliver being dragged away by Mr Bumble by his ear lol
Date: 10/4/2018 8:05:00 AM
Amen dear, Tom! Superb!
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, happy you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 10/4/2018 7:50:00 AM
What a brilliant idea for the contest, now, who would have thought of that? Tom in my eyes you're a Winner with a capital W, however , good luck in the contest....Maria hugs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Maria, I was thinking about the contest and the idea just came to me. Tom P.S. Have emailed you.
Date: 10/4/2018 6:57:00 AM
You fondly recall the miracle of five loves and two fish.. a theme well chosen and delivered..best for a win, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, here in Turkey the price of bread is kept to a minimum so that its affordable to the poor, so the miracle lives on. Tom
Date: 10/4/2018 5:28:00 AM
wonderful senryu
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab. Regards. Tom
Date: 10/4/2018 4:38:00 AM
- A big fish ... a whale ... - Well done,Tom - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2018 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I used my loaf composing this one lol .